Aravind

Hey Laelle! This piece of writing contains devotional and a sort of spiritual subject (related to each other). Nevertheless, I see the significance of the title, as it is subjective ...

Hey Wunderbar! This is an interesting piece, as you've written in the piece using proper English (Old English). This language is always good for poetry as deeper meanings and expressions ...

Hey herbgirl! This is well thought out piece of writing. Firstly you've used rhyming couplet patterns in your work like any other standard piece of poetry. This is good, as ...

Hey RadiantShadow! This is a very heart-warming piece of poetry, it's very romantic in content and description. Content wise, I have no issues as you're describing the sensation of love, ...

Hey AnonymousPerson! This is a very interesting piece you've written. You've written the complete descriptions and narratives about the past and present with effective deeper meanings. Content wise, e

Hey Avawitonsky! This is an interesting piece as you've incorporated cultural references. This has helped you in engaging your readers even more with your writing. Content wise, you seem to ...

Hey Lightsong! This is an interesting piece of poetry because out of the blue you have used brackets. I'll move into details with that later on. Content wise, you're playing ...

This poem is quite something. I say this because every stanza, and the content as a whole has a very insightful deeper meaning to things. Content wise, it's very clear ...

This piece of poetry seems to be straight from the heart - as a personal experience (life event). Due to this, there's so much emphasis on the language use and ...

This poem is a very beautiful piece. You've compared two concepts and linked them, using clever repetition and other forms of word play. In the end it has come out ...

This poem is nice as it's based on the simple subject of "attraction". The poem perfectly describes attraction, and how the sensation is with a person experiencing it. Poetry that ...

This piece of poetry is of great quality, in terms of content and the emotions being brought out. It's a very melancholic poem, therefore so much effort has been put ...

This poem seems to be something of descriptive and a bit of narrative quality. I'm very fond of your writing technique as you describe the atmosphere and environment very well. ...

This is good true confession of yourself. You've helped connect your personal experiences, and help the readers connect their experiences as well. This makes a very appealing "eye-candy" to readers. ...

For a start, this poem is very good in terms of content and appeal to readers. The poem contains the subject of motivation and support/hope for everyone else. Having targeted ...