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  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor
    Re: Why I Don't Write Humor Anymore

    Good job, reaching out might be most times stressful, people tend to judge and misjudge you and they are mostly wrong incorrect. I liked the part you said if I ...

    May 23, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Art of Atelophobia

    This is very profound and emotionally drenching. You honestly did a good job with this piece. I see the first stanza as you talking about your pains in representative of ...

    May 23, 2022

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: I Fell in Love Once

    Honestly I do feel the same way, love is just an unwanted package that comes with overwhelming new feelings. It eventually leaves on vulnerable, after oversharing you eventually end up ...

    May 23, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Why did I ever leave?

    You did a good job with the way you potrayed your idea of the city , posh, claustrophobic and a fancy concrete jail. I also liked the way you found ...

    May 23, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: On Useless Talk

    Honestly, if we could all do this our world would possibly have a chance at being better "I want to shut my ears, I don't want to hear it anymore, ...

    Apr 7, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    Re: Peaches and My Dying Sunflowers

    Starting you in totality describe you two friendship. You described her as a perfect friend. But somewhere down the line you where contemplating the part you said " I claimed ...

    Apr 7, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Nightmare Neverland

    The way you started this poem immediately got my attention. The part you said "ironic equal that's darker" I loved it. Going further the way you also used butterfly as ...

    Apr 7, 2022

  • Art » General, Narrative
    Re: The Walls Are Watching.

    I really enjoyed how you used walls the imagery in my head is brought out I don't have a whole lot of feedback, but one of my favorite sections was ...

    Jan 4, 2022

  • Poetry » Horror, General
    Re: gaunt

    You captured a lot of the conflicting emotions maybe between you and the person I don't have a whole lot of specific feedback, but one of my favorite sections was ...

    Jan 4, 2022

  • Poetry » General, Other
    Re: he who hath...

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    ai really liked your poem! I think it is very profound and emotional; I definitely feel a way when I read this anytime One thing I really enjoyed about this ...

    Dec 23, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: the graveyard of warning signs

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    ai really liked your poem! I think it is very profound and emotional; I definitely feel a way when I read this anytime One thing I really enjoyed about this ...

    Dec 23, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Storyteller Serves a Meal

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    I really liked your poem! I think it's sophisticated though which is partially a good thing One thing I really enjoyed about this poem was how you used line breaks ...

    Nov 20, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Bobo (Upward Dog)

    Points: 12 Reviews: 7 DonateSun Nov 07, 2021 8:46 am Apehdavid2 wrote a review... I really liked your poem! I think (like many of the other reviews said) I'm also ...

    Nov 20, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: What Does it Mean to Dream

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    I really liked your poem! I think (like many of the other reviews said) that it was quite relatable; I definitely feel more when I dream One thing I really ...

    Nov 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: Pieces

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    Hi Scott with a comment I really liked your poem! I think (like many of the other reviews said) that it was quite relatable; I definitely feel more fragile when ...

    Nov 7, 2021


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