AntoniaClarke

Hi. I like the Gothic-y theme of this piece and I think the length is just enough to give a good sense of suspense. However, I feel the general style ...

Hi. This short work was thoroughly entertaining and inventive. The format in which it was written made it easy and faster to read. You also apply your style to a ...

Hi. I like the concept of this work but I feel like it has a knack for pointing out the obvious. This is apparent in the first and last lines ...

Hi. This is a dark story but that is to be expected with the content, but the way it was written helped add to the dark nature of it. The ...

Hi. I love the dark humour here. Horror and humour are clearly united in this work. I found the piece to be entertaining, but also instructional. (Not planning on killing ...

Hi. The colloquial style of the piece at the beginning works very well in hooking the reader. However, by the end of the what you have here, the story has ...

Hi. You have an archaic and kind of Gothic-y sound to your writing that really suits the theme of your piece. Eloquent, styled and clearly thought out. The rhyme is ...

Hi. The parallel between art and science is appealing. However, at the end of the poem I didn't understand what was really the choice the girl was supposed to make. ...

Hi. I feel the colloquial nature of this detracts from its impact. Particularly near the end where you're talking about the pain felt by your character. The use of words ...

Hello. I think this is essentially metafiction. You're a writer talking about a writer, writing. If that makes sense. It's a clever idea because on a site like this you ...

You asked if I would check out your short story and I'm glad I did. This is more than just a vampire story. You portray what happens between two lovers, ...

Hi. I like the intertextuality of this work - although I'm not sure how heavily your words rely on the original song. Although, that isn't necessarily a bad thing. It ...

Hi. So you've created something deep and haunting here. You've made the language work for you; and I can see how the deliberate use of separated, defined stanzas to bring ...

Hi. Clearly you have a dramatic style of writing that translates well into the genre of your choice as well as the form of your poetry. I would say there ...

Hi. It took me a few moments to fully understand the meaning behind this work. I like it. Simple, but effective, you got your reader thinking and anyone who has ...