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Hello, Anne here to leave a review on this wonderful review day! First of all, I really loved this poem. My facorite part was where you said Jesus in Jordans. ...

Hello, Anne here for a review. I apologize if there are any mistakes on is review, I am working on a new device, but will get through it. First of ...

Wowowow this was absolutely beautiful. I love reviewing poems like this because it makes me feel like there really is hope for us younger writers. First of all, your 1st ...

Wow, that is totally not what I expected. Good job, that was beautifully written. I like how you used the analogy of cake, and i also like the way that ...

Hello, I see that you mentioned fixing mistakes. So I am here to maybe help you with another round of revising! My strategy here will be to go paragraph by ...

Wow, this was almost as beautiful as the girl, Alli, that you have chosen to describe here. Use some imagery. If you describe the day, the bus, the driver, your ...

Wow! This poem was so short, yet so good!!!!! I feel like I am reading some lines out of a Shakespearean play, but in the best kind of way. As ...

Well, It was really nice to read a comedic poem. It seems as if way too many poems are strict, serious, and a little tense. It is cool to see ...

Hello, Anne here to leave you a review on this beautiful day! Overall, I really enjoyed reading your poem. Although, it seems as if the first few lines are sort ...

I have not seen or heard about Freaky Fred, but I felt as if this would be a fun poem to review anyhow. First of all, I noticed that your ...

Hello KayKay, Anne here for a review. I really enjoyed your poem, it was short, sweet, and to the point. That being said, I would have loved to see if ...

Hello, Anne here to review your poem. First of all, this was very interesting. It seems as if most poetry is about love or people, it was interesting to see ...

This was a beautiful poem. There is not really much here to criticize, but I will truly try to help you out. First of all, I really like your title. ...

Hello, Anne here to leave a review! First of all, wow! This was an amazing read and I did not expect the ending, good job! It is so twisted and ...

Hello Lousiana! I really enjoyed reading your poem, your style was beautifully unique, something that we do not see on this website very often. I did notice a few errors ...