hey littleredsstoryline!
you are certainly talking about the character Fred from the show 'Courage The Cowardly Dog'.
oh it was awesome. i spent my childhood watchin it. incredible courageous dog.
coming to the poem, it sounds fun. Fred describing his family and the description is too good.
that 'toothy grin', 'silver waves' sounds so interesting. so good choice of words. the overall poem is hands on . i like. it simple and sweet. some rhyming would be magical.
hope to read more of you.
---chitz---
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