AndyS6

Hi, I like your poem, it is an interesting poem taking about a spider. Gives a different outlook on life and spiders. One suggestion that I do however have is ...

Do not lose sight in the good of each side. Things are very polarized these days, which leads to hate on both sides. Do not forget they are people too. ...

Your poem is very well written and thought out. It is very relatable. The flow and rhyme to it is written in a way to emphasize the meaning behind it. ...

I really like what you wrote here. The lack of in depth details in this case gives just enough information to allow the reader to see what you are thinking ...

I like your poem, it is a mix of a bunch of different ideas and thoughts all tossed together into one short poem. Maybe expand on some of the thoughts ...

This is really well written and organized well. It has a good flow to it and it is clear to understand where that flow is. This seems like you could ...

I like your poem it has a good deep message to it. The flow was kind of off and some lines felt like they should be combined where you had ...

I really like your poem here. I used to be that way with all the straight As and rule following, and now I am almost the opposite. Sometimes causing a ...

I like your poem. Some of the stanzas seem somewhat blocky in the sense that the words themselves do not flow cleanly. Maybe changing some of wording and using different ...

The poem is really well done and I like it a lot. It is a good food for thought on the balance of everything in the universe and how it ...

The poem is well written and it seems to have a few different deeper meanings that can be applied to many different situations. Allows the reader to apply the poem ...

Your poem hits; life is truly like this. Hits close to home with me due to a recent break-up. I am fond of the directness and almost bluntness of the ...

The flow of the poem is well written and allows for reflection while reading it. Gives a deeper meaning on where we came from and how it has made us ...

I really like the concept behind this; very unique and different. Food for thought; if she forgets everything every morning she would forget that she does forget. Just give it ...

I think you could have broken it up into stanzas to allow for a flow. Since it is one big chunk it was somewhat hard to know where the breaks ...