Your poem hits; life is truly like this. Hits close to home with me due to a recent break-up. I am fond of the directness and almost bluntness of the poem. It is to the point showing exactly what we feel with less of the extra detail that is not necessarily needed. Closure is truly something we all yearn for and you have summed it up into a well written poem.
Hi there, starrie!I thought this poem portrayed an earnest message about closure in a direct way. The overall mood of the piece seems to be one of quiet acceptance, with a reassuring note at the end. On the whole, I think free verse without any capitalisation is apt for this type of poetry - so well done on choosing a fitting form for your subject matter.LanguageA lot of the language you've used is literal, which can be really good for conveying an earnest message! One place I thought you did this particular well is:
not every one gets it
closureis something one gets before, or aftersomeone is no longer a part of your life
they're gone, and it hurts
the one who passed and you never told them how bright they are
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