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Christmas song poem

by MoonIris


Last Christmas was special

but Santa tell me about the one that's coming up,

will we be rockin' around the Christmas tree?

will we listen to the Jingle Bell Rock?

Surely I'll be home,

for this Holly Jolly Christmas,

it will be a cozy little Christmas,

waiting for the man with the beg.

I hope to have a Wonderfull Christmas,

Santa please Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow,

I wish to build a snowman,

in this Winter Wonderland.

I know Santa Claus is coming to town,

with Rudolph the red nose reindeer.

Look! Here Comes Santa Claus,

it's Christmas time after all.

I don't have much to tell you, just stepĀ  into Christmas,

and thank God is Christmas.

I can't wait to go for a sleigh ride,

because after all, it's the most wonderful time of the year.


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Mon Dec 21, 2020 3:24 pm
AndyS6 wrote a review...



I think you could have broken it up into stanzas to allow for a flow. Since it is one big chunk it was somewhat hard to know where the breaks between the different references to each song. Breaking it up allows the reader to see the clear separation between the references you are making. Other than that I really liked it and it was a very interesting and unique to combine popular Christmas Songs into a poem. :)




MoonIris says...


Hi, thanks for the review. There should be breaks but the site won't allow me to do them. Have a great day :)



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Sun Dec 20, 2020 9:34 pm
LordMomo wrote a review...



Momo's here with a short review!

I really enjoyed reading this! The way it is compiled made it very interesting. There are a few things I would like to point out, so here you go!

I hope to have a Wonderfull Christmas...

It should be wonderful with one l here.

...just step into Christmas...

Only one space is needed between step and into.

That's it! Keep writing, and have a Merry Christmas!!
Momo




MoonIris says...


Thanks for the review :)




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