AnarchyWolf

Good afternoon, SmaugsIntern. AnarchyWolf here to review this fifth chapter. As always, this was a fun, bouncy read with great interactions between the characters. It's bright and comes across as ...

Good evening, SmaugsIntern. AnarchyWolf here to review this second chapter. As always, these characters' banter is great. It's interesting and funny and keeps the story moving along very nicely. It's ...

Good evening, Soulfulwriter. AnarchyWolf here to review this second chapter. Now that I've reviewed the third, I'm hoping that this will provide me with more information. So, here it goes. ...

Good evening, Eros. AnarchyWolf here to review this second chapter. You've written Pachemon very well. You have a knack for writing characters, I feel. You've gotten his mind and his ...

Good evening, Yizhongt. AnarchyWolf here to review this first part of the sixth chapter. First of all, just like last chapter, this has a very strong and clear structure. It's ...

Good afternoon, MemeQueen. AnarchyWolf here to review this first chapter. I quite like the main character here. He seems fairly well-written, and we definitely get a look at parts of ...

Good morning, yizhongt. AnarchyWolf here to review this third part of the fifth chapter. The names you used in this chapter-part are so creative, as Anonymous14 said below. I'm not ...

Good morning, Soulfulwriter. AnarchyWolf here to review this third chapter. This chapter is short, but it does provide a lot of information for the reader, and introduces them to Yakira. ...

Good morning, mmbmio. AnarchyWolf here to review this second chapter. First of all, this is an interesting concept that hooked me almost instantly. These stories are my favorite kind - ...

Good morning, AnnabelleKirkland. AnarchyWolf here to review this prologue. This prologue establishes everything quite well. We've got the circus freak, the singing devil and Alfred, the captor. You se

Good Evening, Felistia. AnarchyWolf here to review this first chapter. The imagery in this piece, as CupcakesForRealMen said below, is really quite impressive. You get the right balance of description

Good Evening, intrastellars. AnarchyWolf here to review this prologue. This is a nice, short prologue that has a brilliant hook and the beginnings of conflict. The hook is the first ...

Good afternoon, Ourcheers2u. AnarchyWolf here to review this first chapter. It starts out with a reasonable hook, seen as the reader would probably want to find out why she's gasping ...

Good morning, SmaugsIntern. AnarchyWolf here to review this first chapter. I've already reviewed the third chapter, so this helped me to understand what was going on a bit more. It ...

Good evening, SmaugsIntern - AnarchyWolf here to review this third chapter. First of all, this is a action-packed chapter that really was quite fun to read. Things and dialogue kept ...