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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The view of a tyrant

    hey Insane The first thing and the only thing I can really say is there's not a lot of imagry or anything to this but the same line over and ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Shut it.

    Hey Matt, Im gonna attempt to help boot all your songs out of the green room tonight (I know it bothers me when i have a work in there for ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Through Our Veins

    Hey Matt, I loved this because it's so relateable and i ate this up. One thing I will say is the flow is a bit choppy. Try listening to a ...

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Top 100 Things We Can't Live Without

    Hey, Mem here for a review Loving the lists so keep them coming xD Nitpick counter:1 I can live without Bae (but no one else can apparently) Ghetto Mexican Bowling ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hellish Lullaby

    Hi there, Mem here for a review Im just gonna jump right in. Rhyme scheme: I think you could maybe tweak it better because as is you're rhyming reads as ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: I can't find happiness

    Hey, Mem here for a review! Judging by the title of your poem here I'm sure you need a friend, go ahead and hit me with a Pm if you ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: like father like son

    Hello, Mem here to be your annoying older sister and give you a review on something touching again. (dont touch me) Sometimes i feel like you capture my childhood, and ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Memories

    Matthew, i was half dead when you wrote this, you know that too well. I think im gonna review it from my personal era so dont expect a whole page ...

    Nov 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Letters from the wasteland

    Hey Ash, I would like to apologize in advance for your marriage, Im so sorry hon. I'm not really going to "Review" this because it is your feelings and I ...

    Oct 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Shadow Crown (CHAPTER 1)

    Hi there, Mem here to review this work you have blessed this site with, Im sure I'll enjoy reading and reviewing it as much as you enjoyed writing it. Welcome ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: The Shapeshifter: Child Of The Wolf

    Hi there, Amnesia here to review these 6 chapters. So I'll break down this review into 6 different parts. Let's jump right into it then? Chapter One So I'll start ...

    May 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Marked Twin, Prologue

    Hi there Mem here for a review. This is a beginning to a novel that does have promise to become great. Now I love reading books that incorporate magic and ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Childhood Horrors Revisited

    Hey there, Mem here for a review First off I love the way you did this story, it kinda turns on itself. Obviously there are some flaws here For instance ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part One

    HI, Mem here for a review ( And a Very happy Review Day to you ) First off I enjoyed this work and would love to see more of it. ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Art » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: A potatoe fanffic

    Hi there, ForgottenMemories here to write you a review since this is floating in the abyss of the Green Room. To be perfectly honest, I don't even know where to ...

    Dec 1, 2015


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