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Re: The view of a tyrant
hey Insane The first thing and the only thing I can really say is there's not a lot of imagry or anything to this but the same line over and ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Shut it.
Hey Matt, Im gonna attempt to help boot all your songs out of the green room tonight (I know it bothers me when i have a work in there for ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Through Our Veins
Hey Matt, I loved this because it's so relateable and i ate this up. One thing I will say is the flow is a bit choppy. Try listening to a ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Top 100 Things We Can't Live Without
Hey, Mem here for a review Loving the lists so keep them coming xD Nitpick counter:1 I can live without Bae (but no one else can apparently) Ghetto Mexican Bowling ...
Nov 16, 2016 -
Re: Hellish Lullaby
Hi there, Mem here for a review Im just gonna jump right in. Rhyme scheme: I think you could maybe tweak it better because as is you're rhyming reads as ...
Nov 16, 2016 -
Re: I can't find happiness
Hey, Mem here for a review! Judging by the title of your poem here I'm sure you need a friend, go ahead and hit me with a Pm if you ...
Nov 16, 2016 -
Re: like father like son
Hello, Mem here to be your annoying older sister and give you a review on something touching again. (dont touch me) Sometimes i feel like you capture my childhood, and ...
Nov 16, 2016 -
Re: Memories
Matthew, i was half dead when you wrote this, you know that too well. I think im gonna review it from my personal era so dont expect a whole page ...
Nov 16, 2016 -
Re: Letters from the wasteland
Hey Ash, I would like to apologize in advance for your marriage, Im so sorry hon. I'm not really going to "Review" this because it is your feelings and I ...
Oct 7, 2016 -
Re: The Shadow Crown (CHAPTER 1)
Hi there, Mem here to review this work you have blessed this site with, Im sure I'll enjoy reading and reviewing it as much as you enjoyed writing it. Welcome ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: The Shapeshifter: Child Of The Wolf
Hi there, Amnesia here to review these 6 chapters. So I'll break down this review into 6 different parts. Let's jump right into it then? Chapter One So I'll start ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: The Marked Twin, Prologue
Hi there Mem here for a review. This is a beginning to a novel that does have promise to become great. Now I love reading books that incorporate magic and ...
Mar 3, 2016 -
Re: Childhood Horrors Revisited
Hey there, Mem here for a review First off I love the way you did this story, it kinda turns on itself. Obviously there are some flaws here For instance ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part One
HI, Mem here for a review ( And a Very happy Review Day to you ) First off I enjoyed this work and would love to see more of it. ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: A potatoe fanffic
Hi there, ForgottenMemories here to write you a review since this is floating in the abyss of the Green Room. To be perfectly honest, I don't even know where to ...
Dec 1, 2015
