No matter how hard I try
I never seem to be able to find happiness
Not in love not in life not in anything.
The only thing that makes me happy is gaming
but that's temporary I want true happiness.
Why can't I find it for myself?
I hate my life so much
I can't ever find someone to love
Without them being ripped away from me.
I can't find something in my life
That makes me happy.
Gaming is temporary but
I want something that can cheer me up when
I'm down and lift me out
Of this hole I'm in now.
What do I have to do
To find that something?
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Hey, Mem here for a review!
Judging by the title of your poem here I'm sure you need a friend, go ahead and hit me with a Pm if you need a shoulder to cry on.
so I'm gonna focus on the message you're trying to convey to me here, Grammar and spelling are the least of my worries and I'll probably touch that a tad bit at the very end.
You tell me that you feel truely happy when gaming, even if it's temporary. I know this isnt the best advice ever but go out there and try to find some groups of gamers. I know a lot of people who game and they tell me that having a good friend to game with all night really helps. I game too and I can tell you that it is more fun when someone is on the other end of that Mic yelling at me to "NOT GO THAT WAY" Do what makes you happy, and when you're not gaming, make up stratigies for how to better play a game or how to beat a level.
Formatting is probably wonky because YWS formats weird and idk
Hope this helped a little
~Mem
Is this off of a real event in your life? My trigger is when people say this kind of stuff in real life, like 'my life sucks' or 'I wanna die' or they say they are going to freak out and they are having a panic attack over something stupid. People who exaggerate A LOT kinda freak me out and I hate drama. This is why I hate lunch period, because my 'friends' only cause drama, but they are my friends and that's what counts i guess? Good work!
It's just depression man so don't worry cause you know what I'm better now then when I wrote this so it's good now and I might need to take this down soon idk