AmberMelanie

Hi HildegardHope~ This is a great poem! Firstly, the rhyming is impressive, because for me it is always hard to rhyme consistently, but you did it! You also kept the ...

Hi AlexWrites~ This is a great story starter and I would love to review it! It starts with a great autumn atmosphere, and the coffee, leaves, pumpkins, and cinnamon help ...

CATSRULETHEWORLD387~ Hi! This is such a good work, I would love to review it!! Overall, it reminds me of looking into a snow globe, but instead of looking at memories ...

Alwaysea~ I really love this poem! I especially like how applicable and relatable it is to young adults. Growing up, I think a lot of people can relate to the ...

valentin3~ Wow, this poem is so powerful! It touches a very sensitive topic and I am glad that it addresses the biggest problems we face today, that some men and ...

redcarnation~ Wow, this is a great and really interesting work! Even though I know it is about a cup, I think it could also represent humans and how we are ...

ariah347~ I love this poem so much and it reminds me of lyrics to a Beach House song. If this were a song I would listen to it so much! ...

NoOneInParticular~ Wow either this caught me at a really vulnerable time or it's just that amazing...just kidding, it's both. This is one of the best poems I have ever read!! ...

L0ca1Tes1a~ I love this poem because it reminds me of a song, "late nights" by mxmtoon. I am also one of those people who stays up later. I think there's ...

L0ca1Tes1a~ When I looked at the title and the description I thought it was going to be a little different. I understand that having friendships with an age gap is ...

AnotherCrowInRow~ I really like the imagery in your story. The chalk on the board, describing Sophia West, the "letter shuffling brain"...all great uses of imagery! My brain being "full of ...

LadyBug~ This poem is pretty creative! I like how it is edited,, it kind of shows the still uncertainty?? Not "want" but "will"; not "say it back" but "scream it ...

Kem6o~ I really love this poem you wrote. I think a lot of people can relate to this one especially. Relationships are confusing...I appreciate that you put "I wanted to ...

Mahima~ I really like this story you wrote. It really captures the college experience and "bad luck" a lot of students feel, especially on the first day. It reminds me ...

Inferno~ I really love what you have done with this poem. The imagery is immaculate! I love the line "the clouds refused to show their gray faces." This to me ...