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Re: Baby Pictures
1) What did you like about this poem? Though it doesn't really rhyme, I like the rhythm (if that's what it's called) and thought it was pretty funny. And yes, ...
Sep 8, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 1
Hi! Aly here for a quick (edit: maybe not so quick..), and hopefully helpful, review. :) I'll go over mostly plot points that stick out to me, rather than individual ...
Aug 23, 2017 -
Re: The Abel and Cain Institution of Higher Learning (Ch. 1-2)
Hi, AlyTheBookworm here for a review! :D I'll just go through what bothered me then end with what I liked. Here goes! "I sit in a cold, gray room. Everything ...
Jun 19, 2017 -
Re: Gardens of Eden (V.2) Chapter One
Hi, AlyTheBookworm here for a quick (EDIT: oops, not so quick) review! Gonna go over what I think you should work on and what I liked. First off, I think ...
May 30, 2017 -
Re: The Rule of Three: Intro
Hi! AlyTheBookworm here for a quick review. :) I'll just give you a few points that I have for this. Keep in mind that this short scene was already good ...
Mar 1, 2017 -
Re: When Summer Ends
Hi! AlyTheBookworm here for a review. :) Overall I liked this short a lot- and I did not see that twist coming! When I started, I thought, "Zombies." Then, "Oh, ...
Nov 19, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1.2 (Unknown Title)
Hi, Aly here with a review! First off, what I liked about this. This is more about the first chapter (didn't get to review it, I might do that later), ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: The Cave - Chapter VIII - Spatulas and Cool Chairs
Hi! Aly here with a review. :) It turns out that I reviewed the chapter after this before reading this one. Oops. Anyways, things make a little more sense to ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Dizzy
Hi, AlyTheBookworm here with a review! I'm not sure if this is a short or if there are other chapters. If there are other chapters, I have not read them ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: The Cave - Chapter IX - The Table of Death by Boring Conversation.
Hi, AlyTheBookworm here with a review! I'll start with what I liked. Overall, I loved this. I also loved the title and didn't think it was lame at all. Lee's ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Poisoned
Hi, Aly here with a review. :) This was pretty short, so there's not too much to critique, but I do have some things to say about it. First off, ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Prologue to 'Unknown Title'
Hi, AlyTheBookworm here with a review! :) This was pretty interesting and the beginning immediately jumped into the action, quickly catching my attention. I will definitely be keeping an eye ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Diminishing of Sanity: Chapters 2-3
Hi, AlyTheBookworm here with a review! This wasn't bad and I hope this review isn't too harsh (because I hate being mean...), but Diminishing of Sanity is in need of ...
Aug 24, 2016 -
Re: Poor, poor Theren
Hi, AlyTheBookworm here with a review! Overall I liked this story a lot, but I do have a few nit-picks with it. To start, there were tons of spelling mistakes ...
Aug 22, 2016 -
Re: Microstory
Hi, AlyTheBookworm here with a review! (This is only my second review, so I hope I do this right) I don't know if this is supposed to be a poem ...
Aug 22, 2016