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Thank you! Both your points will be taken into consideration and you're right about that typo-- it just slipped through my proofreading xD Again, thank you for the review ^-^

same, which is why I love it

Yeah the thing is, when you publish in a community like this, anyone can review, regardless of whether you know them or not~ I just want to say, this is ...

Again, if you don't want reviews, say that in a spoiler or put it up in a blog.

Hey, I'm not asking you to make it perfect for me. You published this and wanted reviews, and you got one from me, so take it or leave it. If ...

Yeah, I should have pointed them out xD That's what happens when I review while fasting. Ash let loose a long sigh. Terence was in his artistic dreamland. Ash would ...

the boob poems must go on..

-giggles-

iou? -bums in-

Oh, what a constructive comment! The glory of it has rendered me speechless! Okay in all seriousness, what is your definition of good enough?

Sparks, this is a gorgeous poem

Right, one more thing, do doctors usually bring amputated limbs with them to show their patients how shriveled they are? Even if the doctor didn't believe that Boy grew a ...

Heya cC, so this isn't really a review, because I'm supposed to be packing so I'm not exactly here it's just a comment. I'm creeped out and disturbed and all ...

..this sums you up quite perfectly ._.

Heya Lumi! Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. You've pointed out places where I could change things, and I agree with them. I can't see why I didn't ...