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Aliceinhorrorland

  • Novel / Chapter » Culture, Realistic Re: Arizona, Chap 1.

    Hey, I’m here to review! I like the way you told it as a memory rather than it just happening. Although that usually tends to be harder I think. But ...

    May 27, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hypocrite

    Hi I’m here to review! As always, I’m going to start with the things I liked: I loved the last dialogue line because it was like “BOOM” plot twist! And ...

    May 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Corvus

    Hello~ I’m here to review. I’ll start with the things I liked: I loved how it didn’t rhyme much and still (for the most part) flowed well. That’s a pretty ...

    May 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Heartbreak; a question of how. Not if.

    Hi, I’m here to review! First off, I actually really liked this poem. It was simple and short, and although I wish it were a bit longer, I think it ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Garbage Chute

    Hello, I’m here to review! I’m going to start with the things I like: I loved the description in this and the metaphors that captivated me until the end. This ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Bubbles

    Hallo, I’m here with a short review! This poem is really pure and simple, which I like. I feel like this is some reminder that not everything is always deep, ...

    May 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Pieces

    Hello, I’m here to review this heartfelt poem! I’m going to start with the things I really liked about this poem: I know that this is an emotional piece and ...

    May 13, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Oh, what a wonderful thing

    Helloooo! I’m here to review this. I think this poem was pretty good and thought provoking, I liked how you ended it because in a way it is sort of ...

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Sorry:

    Hallo, I’m here to review this even if it’s going to eventually be removed. I felt a lot of emotion, mostly anger, in this poem. I loved how you began ...

    Apr 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Should we still pray?

    Hai, I’m here to review! I think this was an interesting poem, I liked the questions you threw throughout it, to make the reader want to read until the end. ...

    Apr 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Five years

    Hello! I’m here to review your poem. I actually liked this poem because it was different, and I also don’t really belong at my school. You’re right, it’s a lot ...

    Apr 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Unanswered Questions

    Heyo, I’m back! I liked this poem a bit better than the last one, because of the dark-ish turn, and it ended better in my opinion. One small critique I ...

    Apr 24, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forgetful

    Hai, I’m here to review dis! First off, this is an amazing remarkable poem that flows very well and I really liked it because it’s relateable to a lot of ...

    Apr 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The Night I Met My Love

    Hello, I’m here to review this! I liked the imagery and descriptions of this poem, because I could see a scene play out in my head. There’s only a few ...

    Apr 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: The Saga of Love

    Hello, I’m here to review your work! I like seeing different people do poems to define love because they always turn out so different from each other, which I find ...

    Apr 22, 2019


Anne felt that life was really not worth living without puffed sleeves.
— L. M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables