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  • Other » Other, Other Re: Depressed

    Hey! This is a very 'other' piece :) I know it can't be much of poem, it's more of a simple verse, or a script, or, well, something else :) ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Am I, I Am

    Hey, this is Alf again with a very short review for a very short piece :) First, I like the title of this piece :D . It's like a mirror-mirror ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Simple Rain Haiku's

    Heya Yubbies! A Quick Critique from me to you! So, just a note from me, I'm a lover of Haiku and I simply adore people who writes one! Anyways, let's ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Circle

    Casp! Hey, this is Al for a review :) I'll give more of an overview of what I, as a reader, comprehended form your piece. Foremost, I'd like to state ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bloodstained Kindness

    Soulkana, long time no see. Well anyways, here's a short review for the sake of you. It's a simple one, by the way, and its not much of a tetchy ...

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Old Gardener

    Heya Barefoot! Here's me for a Quick Critique! CONCEPT & THEME: :D :D :D :D I've always loved a descriptive piece, especially with the theme of nature. I like the ...

    Jun 17, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Seconds Gone By-Chapter One

    Pinky! A review for you! In this one, I'll focus on grammar and storytelling and less on the concept and plot since this is only the first chapter of your ...

    Jun 17, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Turning A Blind Eye

    Aji! I'm here for you again for a review! This one's in response to this piece, Turning a Blind Eye, which I think is affecting and is quite a puzzle ...

    Jun 17, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Henry

    Hey Audy! I was deeply affected by the poem in some way. And that pushed me to give a short review of the piece based on how it affects readers ...

    Jun 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Love has no escape

    Heya Mascara! Love the piece, so I'll render a short, but, as I believe, a helpful review for some stuff that needs to be fixed in the piece. First is ...

    Jun 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Horror, Horror Re: Do not fear and No mistake

    Hey Fantasywolf! Hahaha! I like your name: the Fenrir thematics. Anyways, let me give you a short critique of the piece "Do not Fear and No Mistake". First, though, YOU ...

    Jun 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Poem With No Words (Feelings)

    Future Poet of America (whew, that's a long name ;) )! Here am I, to give a Quick Critique! Hiyaaahh!!! CONCEPT, TITLE AND READERSHIP: :D :D :D :) :? What ...

    Jun 11, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Unveiling chapter 1

    Zozo! Sorry for the late review! Forgive me, please! And don't take the rest of my body off, I still need them :D ! It's a good first chapter, all-in-all. ...

    Jun 11, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: Battle, part two

    Auntie Em! I'm finally here for a review! Sorry for being so late; I'm just really busy, y'see. Now let me give you a short overview of what I have ...

    Jun 10, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fallen Glory

    Aliyah! I'm sorry for the weeks late review! Really, I am! And so, as a request, I'll give a Point Out! But first, I'd say, great wordsmithery! The structures were ...

    Jun 2, 2012


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