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  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: The Traveler - by Skylhur Tranqille author of LANDED WINGS

    Hey ashly! Me here for a very short review! I'm not a poet and all, but I'm an avid reader, and there are just some stuff that you need to ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: ~Gory Answer~

    BLIFFFT! I like reviewing stuff like this, so let me hit you up with one! Let me give you my impressions: I think one of the qualities of the piece ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just itself

    Hey Ange! Me again for the review I promised to give! To make it simpler, I'll just cut the poem into parts, choose a few, and post it here. I'll ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Guardian Angel

    Angel Orchid! Hey, it's me, Alf to fulfill my pruhmise :D Unfortunately, I think it's only me who'll review this time. Sorry! However, I'll try to do my very best ...

    Feb 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Death

    Anwesha! Hey, let me hit you up with a simple Quick Critique from moi, Alf! CONCEPT & THEME: :D :D :D :D :) Simply serene! You have told a story ...

    Feb 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Unable to escape

    Hey Dewdrop! Alf here for a short review on your work, Unable to Escape. You've just stated that this is your first time writing a poem without any rhymes. Well ...

    Feb 10, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For Annie

    Magpie :D I fell in love in the smell of your lovely piece. No really, I did...ahhh. What I like best in this piece is its very variable length. Why ...

    Feb 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Numb

    Unown! Hey, lemme hit you up with a review :D Concept-wise, I think this is a very good example of poetry which exhibits the power of words to transfer one's ...

    Feb 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Imagination

    Auxiira! Am I right that this is your first short story posted here at YWS? If so, then welcome to the first step in getting published? How can I be ...

    Feb 4, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My pretty little heart

    Ten-Ten! What a gloriously icy sweet piece you've got here! What can I say, I easily fall in love with heartsy pieces like this ;) Anyways, let me hit you ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mirrors and Webs

    Hey Shloka! Dropping by for a short review :) Firstly, about your idea. I really liked that you're trying to write about the farther corner of poetry like physics and ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ink

    RainGrae! A Quick Critique for you, my good chap. CONCEPT & THEME: :D :D :D :D :) I was really tickled with the idea of the first lines. They matched ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: A Demon of Hearts

    Hey, Wolf Child! Hahaha! Well, since you're been raised from wolves, you won't mind me calling ya pup, right? Anyways, whatever it is I might label you, let me hip ...

    Jan 26, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Humor Re: The Cow Movement- let???s spread the cud around

    Cowlogic! Hey, let me give you a review for this very lovely piece, Cow Movement! Let me say, this is one of the funniest things I've read for a while! ...

    Jan 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tell Me Not Your Tale of Woe

    Aley! yes, it's me again! Here for this piece's first review! Sorry for popping in for reviews all the time, so now, I'll just give a very quick chop-up to ...

    Jan 21, 2013


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