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Re: The Traveler - by Skylhur Tranqille author of LANDED WINGS
Hey ashly! Me here for a very short review! I'm not a poet and all, but I'm an avid reader, and there are just some stuff that you need to ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: ~Gory Answer~
BLIFFFT! I like reviewing stuff like this, so let me hit you up with one! Let me give you my impressions: I think one of the qualities of the piece ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Just itself
Hey Ange! Me again for the review I promised to give! To make it simpler, I'll just cut the poem into parts, choose a few, and post it here. I'll ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Guardian Angel
Angel Orchid! Hey, it's me, Alf to fulfill my pruhmise :D Unfortunately, I think it's only me who'll review this time. Sorry! However, I'll try to do my very best ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: Death
Anwesha! Hey, let me hit you up with a simple Quick Critique from moi, Alf! CONCEPT & THEME: :D :D :D :D :) Simply serene! You have told a story ...
Feb 11, 2013 -
Re: Unable to escape
Hey Dewdrop! Alf here for a short review on your work, Unable to Escape. You've just stated that this is your first time writing a poem without any rhymes. Well ...
Feb 10, 2013 -
Re: For Annie
Magpie :D I fell in love in the smell of your lovely piece. No really, I did...ahhh. What I like best in this piece is its very variable length. Why ...
Feb 10, 2013 -
Re: Numb
Unown! Hey, lemme hit you up with a review :D Concept-wise, I think this is a very good example of poetry which exhibits the power of words to transfer one's ...
Feb 9, 2013 -
Re: Imagination
Auxiira! Am I right that this is your first short story posted here at YWS? If so, then welcome to the first step in getting published? How can I be ...
Feb 4, 2013 -
Re: My pretty little heart
Ten-Ten! What a gloriously icy sweet piece you've got here! What can I say, I easily fall in love with heartsy pieces like this ;) Anyways, let me hit you ...
Feb 1, 2013 -
Re: Mirrors and Webs
Hey Shloka! Dropping by for a short review :) Firstly, about your idea. I really liked that you're trying to write about the farther corner of poetry like physics and ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: Ink
RainGrae! A Quick Critique for you, my good chap. CONCEPT & THEME: :D :D :D :D :) I was really tickled with the idea of the first lines. They matched ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: A Demon of Hearts
Hey, Wolf Child! Hahaha! Well, since you're been raised from wolves, you won't mind me calling ya pup, right? Anyways, whatever it is I might label you, let me hip ...
Jan 26, 2013 -
Re: The Cow Movement- let???s spread the cud around
Cowlogic! Hey, let me give you a review for this very lovely piece, Cow Movement! Let me say, this is one of the funniest things I've read for a while! ...
Jan 22, 2013 -
Re: Tell Me Not Your Tale of Woe
Aley! yes, it's me again! Here for this piece's first review! Sorry for popping in for reviews all the time, so now, I'll just give a very quick chop-up to ...
Jan 21, 2013
