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AfterTheStorm

A Realist with Big Dreams

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mountain, Hare Funeral

    Hey, Moo! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for you tonight! Happy Review Day from the green team. :) Just from the first few lines, the audience receives an ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: To My Future Niece

    Wow, Highness. I'm thoroughly impressed by the absolute magnificence of this poem. Your niece is a lucky little girl to have an aunt like you. :) *sniffle* II is especially ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mom

    Hello, Lovely! The name is Storm, and I'll be reviewing for you tonight. :) Happy Review Day from the Green Team! Before I start, I just wanted to say that ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love me

    Hello, AwesomeFrance! The name is Storm, and it looks like I'll be your reviewer tonight. :) Happy Review Day from the green team! All right, let's get down to it, ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Augustus Riley

    Hey there, Henri! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for you tonight. Happy Review Day from the green team. :) Let's hop to it, shall we? As a side ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Action / Adventure Re: The Copious Few - Chapter 7

    Hey, Mal! It's Storm here again for another review of The Copious Few. Let's start! :) I don't know how you made something so innocent sounding such as "As her ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 20 Part 2

    Good afternoon, Meg! It's Storm here to review for you on this fine Review Day on behalf of the green team. Let's get down to business ... (to defeat the ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: The Copious Few. Chapter 6

    Hey, Mal! The name's Storm, and I'll be happy to review for you this afternoon. :) I'm going to type as fast as I can because it's almost two o'clock ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 36

    Hey, fortis! I found this chapter without having read any of your other chapters. And now I want to read them all. I honestly have no clue what is going ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Nature

    If poetry isn't your strong point, I'd love to see what is! This was quite beautiful, Shauzer. :D Poems concerning nature have always been a favorite of mine, so I ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

    Hey, Drac! Storm here for another review this morning. Go Earthbenders! :D This review is probably going to be a bit shorter simply because I have to eat breakfast soon... ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Chapter 3

    Hey, Rome! It's Storm here again to review chapter three for you this morning. If you haven't already looked over my previous review on your last chapter, please do so ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Chapter 2.

    Hey, Rome! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for you this morning on behalf of the Green Team. :) *rubs hands together* Let's get to it, shall we? I ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Technology, Dramatic Re: My Father, the Inventor

    Hey, Moonlight! The name's Storm, here to review for you tonight. Happy Review Day! Let's get to it then Wow. I love the overall concept of your poem--how you seamlessly ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Ironclaw: Chapter 2, Part 2

    Hey, King! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for you tonight. Happy Review Day from team Earthbenders! Let's get to it, shall we? First off, just from the first ...

    Nov 30, 2014


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25