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Re: Sonnet #69
Alright so I happen to love the original sonnet, I have it memorized and everything. So you've got a tough critic. But I must say, I love the concept of ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: "Bleeding Puppets"
I love the fact that you made Oswic a female! I do feel more women should be in Hamlet :) Also her strength is remarkable and stoic, which certainly contrasts ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: I Dream
This poem read like a lovely dream
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: What I Was Missing
Wow! :) Great poem, it carries the reader through a beginning, middle, and end like any good story. In fact, what a poetic and beautiful way to represent your testimony! ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Foolish Memories
Whoa, what a powerful piece. It gave me shivers. Not in awe or amazement, although you are a very talented writer...but in the underlying horror of the whole situation. What ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Anti drug poem
Such a good message, thanks for writing this! Keep writing about things that matter like this. I know a few people that could use a look at this poem. I ...
Dec 27, 2013 -
Re: Friends Reunited
This poem is short. It's simple. It's wonderful. There are few words in it, but every word brought back a memory of a reunion. Splendid diction throughout! There's something wonderful ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: An Experimentation
This poem sparkles! It sparkles vivaciously. Absolutely scintillating, I should say. Haha, you just made having a large vocabulary look like loads of fun :) If I was an English ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: Euphoria
This poem has wings. You've captured the feeling of making music and listening to music perfectly. If this was a song, you're right on key. Good verb choices too! Modulating ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Volume 2
This was so original, yet familiar at the same time. I loved it! Simply delightful. Good name choice, the use of Daisy went well with the innocence of the character, ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: Once is Never Enough
I'm just overwhelmed right now about how much truth is in poem. Any writer can relate to this. Any actor/actress too. You've summed up all us dreamers & pretenders perfectly. ...
Sep 6, 2013 -
Re: The Demise of Captain Mar McCaw
This is a whimsical poem! It's delightful and witty and it took me on an adventure. On the surface it's a colorful story...similar to the shell. Sparkly, fantastical, and entertaining. ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: A Million Letters
This poem ripped into my heart more than I'll rip into it. Haha. But really, what a honest and heartbreaking poem. Anyone who ever felt something towards someone who didn't ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: A Dreamer by Sight
You perfectly captured what it looks like to see through the eyes of a Dreamer. Your vocabulary and imagery give strength to this piece. One of my favorite lines is ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: Aine.
Whoa. This is such an intriguing poem. The feeling of missing the way someone used to be is a relatable one. Of someone who used to be familiar being inhabited ...
Sep 1, 2013
