ALittleFallofRain

Alright so I happen to love the original sonnet, I have it memorized and everything. So you've got a tough critic. But I must say, I love the concept of ...

I love the fact that you made Oswic a female! I do feel more women should be in Hamlet :) Also her strength is remarkable and stoic, which certainly contrasts ...

This poem read like a lovely dream

Wow! :) Great poem, it carries the reader through a beginning, middle, and end like any good story. In fact, what a poetic and beautiful way to represent your testimony! ...

Whoa, what a powerful piece. It gave me shivers. Not in awe or amazement, although you are a very talented writer...but in the underlying horror of the whole situation. What ...

Such a good message, thanks for writing this! Keep writing about things that matter like this. I know a few people that could use a look at this poem. I ...

This poem is short. It's simple. It's wonderful. There are few words in it, but every word brought back a memory of a reunion. Splendid diction throughout! There's something wonderful ...

This poem sparkles! It sparkles vivaciously. Absolutely scintillating, I should say. Haha, you just made having a large vocabulary look like loads of fun :) If I was an English ...

This poem has wings. You've captured the feeling of making music and listening to music perfectly. If this was a song, you're right on key. Good verb choices too! Modulating ...

This was so original, yet familiar at the same time. I loved it! Simply delightful. Good name choice, the use of Daisy went well with the innocence of the character, ...

I'm just overwhelmed right now about how much truth is in poem. Any writer can relate to this. Any actor/actress too. You've summed up all us dreamers & pretenders perfectly. ...

This is a whimsical poem! It's delightful and witty and it took me on an adventure. On the surface it's a colorful story...similar to the shell. Sparkly, fantastical, and entertaining. ...

This poem ripped into my heart more than I'll rip into it. Haha. But really, what a honest and heartbreaking poem. Anyone who ever felt something towards someone who didn't ...

You perfectly captured what it looks like to see through the eyes of a Dreamer. Your vocabulary and imagery give strength to this piece. One of my favorite lines is ...

Whoa. This is such an intriguing poem. The feeling of missing the way someone used to be is a relatable one. Of someone who used to be familiar being inhabited ...