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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The first look

    Hey Des0late, Achu here to review your work. Having started well, it was appealing to go further. But you have abruptly fenced your thoughts and the poem has lost it's ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I Looked in His Eyes

    Hey HomeschooledTeen, Your work is far good for an explanation. The love you have expressed is not to be weighed on any account. You are seeking love of extreme and ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who Are We Without the Rain?

    Hey Wherethewindgoes, Achu here to review your work. Let start it by greeting you a happy review day! This indelible work shows your perpetual love towards nature and your observing ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Afraid

    Hey kayfortnight, Achu here to review your work. To start with the topic, it is a good choice to express via wide range of words. Your work is well structured ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Look past Her

    Hi there ( SailerGirl ), They way you have spun every lines make me travel the way along with you. That was incredible to suit the explanation of the lost ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lilies on the Water

    Hey Aouther2b , Achu here to review. This is well structured in form of poem. But the punctuation is no where to be found. Otherwise your work is well written. ...

    May 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Waiting for You

    Hey Rosan, Here is my review. Your longing feel is envisioned to me not just literally but by heart. You have tried to get the rhythmic count and it has ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Moving on

    Hey Rosan, Here is my review. Firstly it is so enthusiastic to review your work on this review day. You have got good choice of words and I can find ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: He was the Past, You're my Future

    Hey BelleBeauty, Here is my review for your work. You have made dafting comparison between your past and the present by your lines. I like the way you made readers ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you...

    Hey Panda11, This is my review for your work. The meaning you are about to convey is well conveyed. Though short, it is definite in it's meaning. The part of ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Bury Me

    Hey PumpkinCat, Here is my review. Your poem is a clear cut profile I would say. So short and crisp and good choice of words. Lack of punctuation is the ...

    May 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Stranger

    Hey Dreamy, Here is my review for your write up. I would regard this an absolute poem. It is contented with everything that is the requisite. i totally enjoyed reading ...

    May 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wonderland

    hey quietcuppi, Here is my review! Your poetic lines are so minimal for you to describe about the circumstances you are stacked in. Why I point this is because I ...

    May 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Song For My Child

    Hey glovegg, The impact is clearly propagated. But still some feel is missing to me accordingly. Maybe i did not get your tint. I would quote this as my favorite ...

    May 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Will You?

    Recycled soul , You have just impinged the feel of your content righteously. I just got assimilated on what you are about to... but still punctuation didn't work out well.....I ...

    May 14, 2013


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