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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Quint.1.

    Okay, I don't have time to do a long review so I'll just give you an overview on the content rather than concentrating on every single spelling and grammar mistake ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 1.1

    I thought that, seeing as you've reviewed so much of my work, I would take a look at some of your stuff and I'm glad I did! Before we get ...

    Nov 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Poem of the Oneiroi

    I love the way you've used the ancient Greek for Chronos, which means time (wow my Greek teacher will be proud I remembered that) because I feel that it really ...

    Nov 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love me

    Before I read this, I had absolutely no idea what a quatrain was so thank you for showing me what it is. This is a poem which I think that ...

    Nov 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Writer

    Something that I noticed with this poem is that it isn't really a poem. Whilst this is fine, I wouldn't really put it into the 'poetry' category. Or alternatively, you ...

    Nov 2, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: After Last Night

    I like the lyrical flow of this piece and the way that you've used rhyme subtly rather than making the mistake of forcing the piece to rhyme. I love the ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 33: The Discovery

    When I scrolled through your story, I noticed that there's a lot of chunky paragraphs which don't look very appealing to read. The thing with reading online is that a ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: To My Future Niece

    This is a beautiful poem about a beautiful event. I love all of the imagery that you use, especially the lines about dreaming of roses and wild hearts. Whilst I ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: fort

    For some bizarre reason, this reminds me of the Latin word 'fortis' which means brave (wow, my Latin teacher must be proud of me for remembering that) and how forts ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Living Stories

    As someone who loves books and who has far too many books on her bookshelf, I can really relate to this brilliantly-written poem. I love the way you've taken an ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Chill of Fire

    I love this description of Autumn! It's so beautiful and accurate that I can't help but long for the leaves to fall off the trees outside my window. I'm no ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poems for entertainment

    I know a lot of people don't like rhyme but I loved the way you used rhyme so effectively in the first poem. it just made me smile and I ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Recipe for the Cure of Cattle

    I can't help but wonder where you got the inspiration for this poem from. Do you have cattle? I'm just interested. Whilst I loved the entire poem, my favourite part ...

    Oct 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Death

    I love reading poetry and I really loved reading your poem. It's beautifully-written and has a lyrical feel to it. I love the meaning of the poem and the way ...

    Oct 30, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Romantic Re: How to cope up with a break-up

    When it comes to your piece, I really wish that I couldn't relate to the feelings of a breakup but sadly I can. I like the advice you give and ...

    Oct 30, 2014


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