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Hi,
Wow... This is a great poem! I found it a little hard to read the font however. On a different note, this poem is well written. You did a great job incorporating this twisted side to a poem that has a milady calming effect. Normally when things start getting bloody you can feel a shift of mood in the story. But this story maintained a calming effect the entire time. It also reminds me of something that would be found in a supernatural episode! I look forward to reading more of your work!
sincerely,
collideascope
I can't help but wonder where you got the inspiration for this poem from. Do you have cattle? I'm just interested.
Whilst I loved the entire poem, my favourite part would have to be the final lines: 'Avoid using on rams; instead apply once for a cow and X times for a man' I found this really funny and to be honest, I love it when poems make me laugh
We did at a time, yes. Sadly we've sold off much of what stock we had, but I always enjoyed working with them and of course, writing about them. I'm glad it made you laugh, thanks for reading!
here's a thought, USE GRASS NOT CORN
great poem by the way moo
thanks.