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Re: Endless
The concept of this poem is very interesting and new. I’m not sure if this character is experiencing this dream because of an event that actually occurred or just a ...
May 18, 2019 -
Re: bullying.
Hey, 1nspire here for a review! This poem was really powerful. Though I have not experienced this exact situation, I can relate to some of the thoughts. It's great that ...
May 9, 2019 -
Re: There's No Soul in Retail
Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I liked the point of view of this poem; people take workers for granted often and it’s interesting to read from that perspective. I’ve ...
Apr 21, 2019 -
Re: The Battlefield
Hey, 1nspire here for a review! Great work on this piece. The thing they really stuck out to me here was the detail with which you describe each and every ...
Apr 20, 2019 -
Re: She Was
Wow. This is a really powerful piece. I absolutely loved the last few line. I think there are a lot of people who need to read this piece. The emotion ...
Apr 20, 2019 -
Re: Keeper of Secrets
Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I really liked the emotion in this piece. It seems to get progressively darker, which was cool because it showed how keeping secrets may ...
Apr 20, 2019 -
Re: Pain
Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I really liked the message in this poem. Love is mysterious and hard to understand sometimes and even through pain, it often emerges victorious. ...
Apr 20, 2019 -
Re: AJ's Mother
Hey! 1nspire here for a review. I really like the premise of this story. The imagery is great and I liked that I could picture the characters really well because ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: The Reviewer
Hey, 1nspire here for a review! Let me start off by saying it's so cool that you used 2nd person point o view, as this is rare in literature, but ...
Jan 26, 2019 -
Re: An Incredible End
Hey, 1nspire here for a review:) First of all, I'm sorry that you had an experience like this, but it's the sincerity really came across throughout. It's important for writers ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: N/A
This is such a powerful story! While reading, it was easy to relate and sympathize with the protagonist due to your use of dialogue and imagery throughout. As a person ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: Multi
Hey, 1nspire here for a review! I really loved the suspense that you created throughout the story. Oftentimes, the protagonist is one of the smartest characters, and seems to always ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: soft light and big hearts//vignette. {edited}
This is so cute! I love that you used second person, which is rare, but really makes this story so much sweeter. I love the way that the characters don't ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: Infamous
I absolutely loved this! It's amazing that you were able to portray the personalities of these characters so well in such a short story. Also, I love the way you ...
Dec 23, 2018 -
Re: A little hello to straight parents with not-so-straight kids
Hey TheMulticoloredCyr! (Love the username) Let me start off by saying that the message in this poem is absolutely incredible. I think there are a lot of people who would ...
Dec 23, 2018
