Hey, 1nspire here for a review!
I really liked the emotion in this piece. It seems to get progressively darker, which was cool because it showed how keeping secrets may not start out difficult, but overtime can build into something unthinkable. The rhyme scheme was great and the repetition allowed for great flow throughout the piece. While this isn’t relevant to the writing, I also really enjoyed the way that the stanzas were spaced, this added to the flow as well.
Amazing work, I look forward to reading more in the future!
Points: 548
Reviews: 57
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