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Hi it's 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! First Impression: so this is a poem to open up a story, i'm getting the impression that it might ...

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*GASP* Yay!!! Have fun Ellie!! Edit: I realized I gasped in the other comment too... Funny because I completely forgot I wrote it XD

After a run-in with death catalyzes Sasha’s reunion with his best friend, they take some time to reflect on their situation. CW: Smoking

Marcus Grendel is going to Prom, his very first step into adulthood. But fear tugs at the corner of his mind, for as we grow, we must wear a facade.

That upon which my dragon's eye fixed It's hard to find a specific thing to comment on in the first section. I really enjoyed your description of the setting and ...

Hi Moonlily! Let's get started. First off, OHMYGOSHHOWISTHISSOGOODTHISISAMAZINGHOWHOWHOW!!!! *gasps for air* Ahem. I'm so honored that you dubbed me worthy of reviewing this masterpiece! ...this is a

Devlin and Malcolm make headway in their research endeavors

Hey there. The title caught my eye. The poem did not disappoint. So, a little bit of context: I may or may not have an entire, serious, and just as ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, And yes, the weed was ...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS! Let's take a look at what you've got here :) And yes, the weed was laced with meth, and when we found out my mother ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS :) It has been here as long as I have. At first we did notice its presence. I believe you meant to say that ...

Hi there, here for a little review :) I love the imagery of this poem. The cosmos is such a fun environment to frame any story in, and can be ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

My experience with fair-weathered friends composed into a poem.

Hello Hello, I hope you dont mind popping in with a quick review as I slowly read through this novel. This was a very solid chapter I can see the ...