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I do quite like this poem. I like the structure alot and the way you have singled out certain lines. I really love the opening to the poem aswell: It ...
LuckiestLoser - Feb 24, 2007 - 1 min read
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Bathed in the glow of a street light a lone vending machine hummed. The neon lamp buzzed and flickered, plunging the storefront in and out of darkness. A car door ...
inkweaver22 - Feb 24, 2007 - 3 min read
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I really like this. I couldn't find much flaw in the actual content. It's definitely original. I love the descriptions at the end. The quote, "I don't care if you ...
mandax - Feb 24, 2007 - 1 min read
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This is something i started writing on wednesday. Ive done this part, and i've started on 2 other parts. My plan is to write the beginnings of each part (i ...
L - Feb 24, 2007 - 30 min read
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This is the first poem i've written in a while, as I mainly prefer to write stories, but anyway, read, enjoy and all constructive criticism would be much appreciated. Thank ...
Nikiller - Feb 24, 2007 - 2 min read
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Take it in Verse 1: I’m whizzing through my life Can’t remember what happened to me Yes, it went by so fast I didn’t even see I skimmed across the ...
michellel96 - Feb 24, 2007 - 1 min read
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Chapter 2 The huge peaks of the White Mountains were turning slowly orange with the setting sun, and the sky was changing colour from a light blue to an eerie, ...
jord - Feb 24, 2007 - 27 min read
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Airborn is such a goooood book! It's about a young cabin boy named Matt Cruse, aboard the airship, Aurora, during the 1930's. (or around then) His father died falling off ...
michellel96 - Feb 24, 2007 - 2 min read
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Understand Myself Intro: Not blinking Not breathing I'm thinking About my feelings The dark nights are darker Without you by my side Because you helped me through the hardest night ...
michellel96 - Feb 24, 2007 - 2 min read
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Chapter 1 Horn Hill was the kind of feature that will always be given a name if there are people in its vicinity. A distinctive shape, that of an upside-down ...
jord - Feb 24, 2007 - 24 min read
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Moving their fit bodies to the beat - blasting from the portable stereo - was a group of street dancers. Each and every one of them came from an average ...
~love.dance~ - Feb 24, 2007 - 4 min read
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This is the diary of Autumn Day Blake. Do not read the contents of this journal or you will suffer the consequences! Namely, extreme boredom.
TellATaleForTwo - Feb 24, 2007 - 9 min read
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Title: ‘IS DANCE’ – the international school of dance Author: ~love.dance~ Rating: PG- 13 Warnings: some violence and some adult themes Summery: Tasha witnessed a double murder a couple of ...
~love.dance~ - Feb 24, 2007 - 8 min read
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The lights on the vanity shone with a powerful but kind glow, softly reflecting off her face’s smooth features. She gently patted blush onto her bare cheeks, accentuating her pale ...
mandax - Feb 23, 2007 - 3 min read
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You were never more than a hang up on the answering machine; a missed call, a series of mechanical bleeps and blurbs, compelled to voice by the prompting of my ...
Cameron - Feb 23, 2007 - 1 min read