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i'm obviously trying to publish a bunch of poems, and really could use some crits. thank you!!! The time I spent with you was bliss, but now those days are ...

I'm working on getting a bunch of my poems published, and could really use some help critiquing them. THANK YOU!!!! Ignore the nasty words That all those guys just said, ...

Ok, I'm trying to get a bunch of my romantic poems published in a small book, and I could REALLY use some help with getting them super good. PLEASE CRITIQUE ...

This is my first attempt at quiet horror, tell me what you think. It's also kind of short, but... whatever. I can't really figure out how it could be much ...

“For once, mom, will you just listen to me?” Evelyn shouted at her mother. “I always listen!” “But you don’t hear me!” “Evelyn," her mother said sternly, "you know I ...

Alex DeJule was a very young boy When he saw his father killed before his eyes He soon realized that life was not a toy And everyone would die Well, ...

Prologue: The Vengeful Goddess It all began with a seed. The seed of life one might say. It struggled in a cosmic ocean, endeavoring toward its destination. Blind in determination, ...

You were at sitting at home looking at the pictures you took in the past. You saw every little detail, from what you took now was far better than you ...

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"CHARGE!" The depleted units of stormtroopers charged with a last valliant stand for glory, until he arrived. "For the Empire!" they shouted in unison, forming a blockade that smashed through ...

Chechnya Rain falls down gently onto the weeping soil That was just under the burden of bombardment And shapes move out in the mountains Untold multitudes of struggling resistance The ...

~I haven't been able to write much good poetry for a if anyone knows how to tap into a fried muse, it would be appreciated muchly!~ Glacial as December, you ...

Chapter 1Blueman Life was cyclic, Kwin mused. He got up, he went to work, he mined, he carried, he went home and he went to bed. The routine was infallible ...

Ok. So I posted a much shorter version of this poem and people didn't really like it. They thought that it was too short, and sort of repetitive. Well, this ...