Young Writers Society

Hi, This is a very rough draft of chapter 1 of my first story. Any critiques would be more than welcome ! Don't be afraid to go tough . I ...

Chapter 1. Fighting wars with myself Dearest Leona, It’s strange to think of how a person can wake up one morning expecting their normal dreary day to day life to ...

This is a story that I have converted from a roleplay with permission from the other participants. The grammer is not perfect, I know, but I'm looking for critique on ...

I seem to think I must be like her Delicate, patient, pleasant, She’s never said an ill word of anyone. Her inner beauty shines through her pores. And here am ...

With a face of an angel and a smile that can kill Her eyes burn a hole in you that only she could fill Maybe the next moment will bring ...

[pre] In a land before time, where mountains are still young, in three different times, heroes will meet. They will cross vast expanses of time and space, and almost nothing ...

This is a mock epic we did in creative writing. Please critique honestly. Thank you. A pale pen hovered in the air, Tempting it’s bearer with a dare. A dare ...

This is a very embellished personal narrative I wrote for creative writing. Please critic (don't hold back). Thank you. I stare in disbelief as people speak of their deaths. They ...

Many have asked why we are here, or what happens to us when we die. Some follow religion as a guideline while other dig through science. In truth there is ...

Why am I so stupid, not to even believe? That all the world around me, has nothing to concieve. They don't know who I am, but can read me like ...

I know that i'm not perfect, but you better know I tried. You'll never get to see, the many tears i've cried. Sometimes I don't get, why you can't see ...

The Elf King By Hayley Hall Chapter 1 Jamie, a fifteen year old freshman at New Town High, was coming home from school after a usual hard day at school. ...

Since I'm not quite sure that everyone who is reading this is quite understanding what I am trying to do with my Mutts project, I will explain it right now. ...

If the formatting is a little fucked up in places, it's because the pre tag was doing crazy things with the preview button, so I got rid of it and ...

In my rusty old van I slowly pull up to Be-Bop's house. It's was small, like most houses in Caliburogh. In fact in most ways its was just like every ...