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I'm concerned mostly with what you're impressions are of the gryphon and the Lord at the end of this piece. Any other technical feedback is welcome.I will be writing notes ...
Griffinkeeper - Oct 31, 2006 - 4 min read
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“How far is it to the moon?” she asks. You look down at the top of her head. “A long ways, my love,” you say. She turns and gazes up ...
carelessaussie13 - Oct 30, 2006 - 1 min read
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Soothing from the AC, a chill flowing from the fan Transparent yet noticeable creeping behind a sweaty back, -hair stands straight goosebumps rage- the mellow shock contaminates, the body as ...
Chandni - Oct 30, 2006 - 1 min read
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I thought it was good, for the most part, the shift of seasons as it were is clearly developed through the stanzas. However I was a bit disappointed by the ...
Firestarter - Oct 30, 2006 - 1 min read
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It wasn’t morning yet, but Fen knew she had to get up, because John, her ‘boss’, got cranky if she was late for work, as often a boss can be. ...
Davidude - Oct 30, 2006 - 44 min read
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well, this is my first post so go easy on me ----------------------------------------------------------- The sun and the sea As I sit alone and wonder, Letting my thoughts drift into the abyss, ...
in_too_deep - Oct 30, 2006 - 1 min read
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Chapter 1 Leafmin could barely contain his excitement. He was going on a quest! All the way to the Elven realm too. Hundreds of questions were buzzing around in his ...
lillizard - Oct 30, 2006 - 5 min read
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Greetings, editor. This is a poem from my story, told from the point of view of a guy, not a girl. I'm not happy with it, so any advice as ...
Shafter - Oct 30, 2006 - 1 min read
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My heart burns pationately for your desire The truth eats at my soul Both, they burn on fire But still there is that peice of my heart, a huge, gaping ...
Swires - Oct 30, 2006 - 1 min read
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Im not a poet but heres one I wrote several years back ----- When I see your ghostly figure, I know it cannot be real, For you are torn forever, ...
Swires - Oct 30, 2006 - 1 min read
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I'm not quite sure where this is going, so all I want to know is if you think I should continue or not, and any comments would be welcome! I ...
cathy - Oct 30, 2006 - 13 min read
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These are a couple songs ideas I have been dabbling with. Let me know what you think. Try to listen to each one twice, they might seem a little strange ...
Cornelius_Quinnsomer - Oct 30, 2006 - 1 min read
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These. (Written October 30, 2006.) I was on edge. The icy wind, biting cold, and that charmingly obnoxious, beautifully aggravating contradiction of a boy might have had something to do ...
Shriek - Oct 30, 2006 - 4 min read
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Solitude Come to my heart with a mask of purple, gold and green, come with your twisted candlestick smile, come with kisses and lies and wilted roses and maybe I ...
cymbeline_x - Oct 29, 2006 - 1 min read
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He came from nowhere, Incan did From the murky depths of the sea. A primitive brain with a primordial yearning To eat all the poems he could see. While slinking ...
Snoink - Oct 29, 2006 - 1 min read