I thought it was good, for the most part, the shift of seasons as it were is clearly developed through the stanzas. However I was a bit disappointed by the hand finding another thing -- I think it's been done a lot (by you, previously) and thought you could come up with something stronger/original.
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If the descent of colors is purposeful:
You mentioned yellow after saying "blue", which reverses the effect and didn't give it a direct transition. And then here:
Descent of yellow...but we've already moved past that?
If that wasn't purposeful...it should've been.
I liked the ending. Just a fall poem.
Tight decscription I really like, but you might have forgotten an "a" here
Again a very tight description, and a very well use of color
I believe here that there are 2 questions being asked, the first one you leave open, no question mark and the second you do add a question mark to. I could understand why you'd want the first one to be left open but it kind of blurs the whole image - a very nice one by the way - so maybe a comma could make things clearer
Here I pointed out falling, as I'm not sure about what you meant here, is it "the hands fall" or a "falling hand" both seem to fit the situation quite proper but on my opinion a "falling hand" is little more suitable.
The second thing I pointed at "We trust our feet....." Well this is breathtaking well well done Brad, fascinating indeed
I like the ending as in apart from what you've written above, I just have the feeling it all doesn't suite so well
Overall I liked your once in a while use of colour I believe you chose them very well
Well done Brad
~Cheerios, Chandni