My heart burns pationately for your desire
The truth eats at my soul
Both, they burn on fire
But still there is that peice of my heart, a huge, gaping hole
That hole needs filling with your love
your presence needs to be
Set free my heart, like a gentil dove
And come to be with me
Let the Jade and diamond knit together
to weave a golden harp
so I may play our love forever
like the sweet singing sound of a lark
Your gentil skin, youur flaxen hair
oh how I crave your love
please come to be , my glance, i stare
once more, like the free silken dove
May I hope the hole will be repaired
and continue with my tune
The dove and lark together for cared
and my love run riot soon
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lol, Why thank you Dream. It was written for someone very special for me
Beautiful, Phorcys. You get a 10+/10.
Very beautiful. Gorgeous, in fact.