Published October 30, 2006
My heart burns pationately for your desire
The truth eats at my soul
Both, they burn on fire
But still there is that peice of my heart, a huge, gaping hole
That hole needs filling with your love
your presence needs to be
Set free my heart, like a gentil dove
And come to be with me
Let the Jade and diamond knit together
to weave a golden harp
so I may play our love forever
like the sweet singing sound of a lark
Your gentil skin, youur flaxen hair
oh how I crave your love
please come to be , my glance, i stare
once more, like the free silken dove
May I hope the hole will be repaired
and continue with my tune
The dove and lark together for cared
and my love run riot soon
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lol, Why thank you Dream. It was written for someone very special for me
Beautiful, Phorcys. You get a 10+/10.
Very beautiful. Gorgeous, in fact.