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Flawless Reaction

by Chandni


Soothing from the AC,
a chill flowing from the fan
Transparent yet noticeable
creeping behind a sweaty back,
-hair stands straight
goosebumps rage-
the mellow shock contaminates,
the body as a building
Set to quarantine,
incapable of breathing in
slowly fading away;
-body regenerates-
Returning to faze one,
before the reaction,
created by the wintered chill
Back to the dessert
where the only sweat
Lies deep inside
this glorious obstacle
our Gods creation


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Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:17 am
Chandni says...



hahaha ik wou persee geen stanza's schaap :P




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Wed Nov 01, 2006 8:17 pm
little x soldier wrote a review...



flawless..

Ik heb flawless opgezocht en het betekent perfect en 'watertight'. Welke van die twee?
volgens mij perfect..

waarvoor zijn die -""-?
sla regels over

had zin :P





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