Young Writers Society

Honest, brutal opnions wanted. Any forced rhyming, anything that doesn't seem to fit? I'll post some crits as soon as I can, I don't spend enough time in the lit ...

The melody of life Torn apart by the gust of rollicking wind Hanging like a twitched thread of a sail, Swaying to the command of the breeze, Dancing to the ...

The lost melody! The last droplets of the first shower of the season were still clinging to my glass window rims. In a few minutes Orhilina was to come, for ...

Light O light! You were meant to kindle- The path of light with your flame, But you burn me from top to toe With desires over which, I should have ...

To love Every morning breaks through the fans, Of the palms quiet groves.The seaside fishermen return as, The lush waves summon.River twins the Padma and the Ganges,

Time Characters: Male

Well, heres my atempt at somthing resembling a story! Once upon a time, there was a land so thick with jungle and fog that no sky could be seen through ...

Chapter Eight Landon turned the camera on and they started down the steep hill. “And we’re off on a midnight journey into the woods,” he said dramatically behind the camera. ...

As Jimmy look around at his apothecary, he seemed at a loss of words. He wasn’t quite sure what to expect. Chantal’s face seemed distant, and some how Jimmy got ...

I could use a fresh beginning too All of my regrets are nothing new This is a way, that I say I need you This is a way, this is ...

Suzie was rotten to the core Introduction Suicide note: Beige or white wallpaper sheathed in freckled billions, the occasional dimple cause unidentified, scotch tape marks gray imprints that effective

A Dramatic End This is the end of my life. I stare off into the distance, squinting from the bright light. It has to end now, that's how it's supposed ...

Demons are known world-wide from fictional tales and our T.V. screens. But what you watch and read doesn't describe the real Demons. These tales do not describe to you the ...

I wasn't feeling very creative when I wrote this but heres what i have for the next part. Feel free to tell me if it is really horrible because I ...

SCREECH! SCREECH! SCREECH! I rolled over as my alarm screeched loudly. Not bothering to open my eyes, I turned off the alarm. It was seven in the morning, the time ...