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by Anamel in Poetry » Dramatic


The Sleeping Prince and the Knight
by dahlia58 in Short Story » Other


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  • Reviews » Short Story » Realistic, General
    40 Seconds

    The introduction is certainly attention-grabbing. I think it's great for making a new reader continue to read on, like a hooker in an essay. Because it's the beginning, it will ...

    Anamel
    Anamel - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Realistic
    Winter From a Hater's View

    Hey Softballgirl333! Katja here to review your poem! As always please feel free to disregard any comments or suggestions I make if you find them unhelpful. That being said, let's ...

    KatjaDawn
    KatjaDawn - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Realistic, General
    40 Seconds

    Hey Aari, DrFeelGood here to review your unusual piece. Let's dive into this piece shall we? Plot I am a little puzzled with the intention of this piece. It starts ...

    DrFeelGood
    DrFeelGood - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Other, General
    The Sleeping Prince and the Knight

    Hi Dahlia, I really enjoyed reading this mini story. It's melancholy and sweet, and I love the fairy tale vibes. I do have some questions that you might consider addressing ...

    Nymeria
    Nymeria - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Realistic
    Winter From a Hater's View

    Alright. Interesting. Not my perspective for sure, but completely valid. I liked how you rhymed some lines but not all of them-- excessive rhyming can be annoying. "On the oh-so ...

    Nymeria
    Nymeria - 6 hours ago

  • Short Story » General, General
    A Good Reason Not to Move to America

    Making children recite the Pledge of Allegiance is creepy. It's creepy.

    Nymeria
    Nymeria - 6 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Pure-Hearted DT

    How’s it going @HazelGrace16?

    Europa
    Europa - 7 hours ago

  • Forums » Lounge, The
    The "I'm Back" Thread

    Technically on & off, but back? IDK I hope I stay long enough this time!

    StefanosVorkas
    StefanosVorkas - 7 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    The Outlands [DT]

    If anyone's looking for a new collab pad! I created one with a new pad site that someone discovered? Not sure who, but it seems legit. It's pretty similar to ...

    soundofmind
    soundofmind - 10 hours ago

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Winter From a Hater's View

    Something Short and not-so-sweet about winter!

    Softballgirl333
    Softballgirl333 - 10 hours ago
    E - Everyone

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    How Do You Plead: 2.2

    Hey, no nit-picks really. Most specific thing is a whole paragraph which there's not much point in quoting. That paragraph is the last one. It's kind of a jolt in ...

    ExOmelas
    ExOmelas - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    How Do You Plead: 2.1

    Hi again, still not midnight and I'm 3 reviews away from 5 blue stars... Why did there always have to be stupid fucking metaphors like this in the pathway to ...

    ExOmelas
    ExOmelas - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    How Do You Plead: 1.3

    Hiya, just waiting til midnight so I can start this week's LMS, thought I'd do some reviewing: He avoided a tasteless joke about sailors while adding the name to his ...

    ExOmelas
    ExOmelas - 12 hours ago

  • Forums » Lounge, The
    I'm Writing, Come Join Me!

    I wanna write LMS but it's still several hours til midnight *grumbles*

    ExOmelas
    ExOmelas - 12 hours ago

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    40 Seconds

    Imagine the worst place you could be during an earthquake. Now imagine you were naked.

    Aari
    Aari - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Realistic
    Home

    Hi, Zaibae. This is Aari, and I read your poem and just wanted to let you know what a great job you did. Although, I have one feedback for you: ...

    Aari
    Aari - 12 hours ago


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