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by Audy in Poetry » Dramatic


bleu / azul / blu
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The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 10
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Mabel's Gardens
by Lumos in Short Story » Fantasy


Midnight Hippos, the rise of slice Chapter one V1 (feedback please)
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  • Forums » Lounge, The
    Please Welcome Your New Space Frogs

    Congratulations!! You guys deserve it

    Sheadun
    Sheadun - 24 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Wrath of Olympus DT

    I promise I'm working on this post, guys. For some reason my computer's having some trouble saving my progress so the going is slow.

    Europa
    Europa - 30 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    A wounded soldier

    Pretty nice. All the rhyming sounded natural, and you could hear the soldier's yearning for a normal world. Just a typo correction - it's 'peoples'', not 'people's''. I like how ...

    PearlC10
    PearlC10 - 53 minutes ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    The Blank Storybook [DT]

    That's 4am for me XD Would it be possible to do it on the weekend? Or does that not work for anyone? If so, I could probably make that time ...

    CoffeeCat
    CoffeeCat - 54 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Mabel's Gardens

    Hello! A really good plot. I would just recommend a bit more emotion, maybe also a bit more description of Chessie and her sister so we can picture them. Maybe ...

    PearlC10
    PearlC10 - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, General
    bleu / azul / blu

    Wow! Really cool. You can almost see it, the way you describe it - dancing in the mist, twirling about, your partner complimenting you on your eyes ... then he ...

    PearlC10
    PearlC10 - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Historical Fiction, Spiritual
    Anonymous

    Hey there PearlC10, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Before I get started I would just like to welcome you to YWS, it's always great to see a new ...

    myjaspercat
    myjaspercat - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Masquerade ~ Chapter 4+5

    This is a great piece of work which uses dialogue really well to create characters, as well as to make the story more engaging. I certainly didn't lose interest. However, ...

    SteppenwolfDeSade
    SteppenwolfDeSade - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Historical Fiction, Spiritual
    Anonymous

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! What I'm most confused by here is the rhyme scheme. The main complaint I have there is that this isn't consistent. ...

    Nikayla
    Nikayla - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Midnight Hippos, the rise of slice. Chapter two V1

    Hello, interesting concept for a story, here are my critiques: 1) Why is there a random use of italics near the beginning, and why is some dialogue in italics and ...

    SteppenwolfDeSade
    SteppenwolfDeSade - 2 hours ago

  • Forums » Lounge, The
    The Great Tortoise Race!

    Thanks! I'll try and review a lot in August, though.

    MJTucker
    MJTucker - 2 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Of Blood & Royalty DT

    Damn, I must've posted it in the SB by accident. Sorry about that.

    SirenCymbaline
    SirenCymbaline - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Historical Fiction, Spiritual
    Anonymous

    Hi there! Congratulations on posting your first piece on the site! It's well-edited and I like the old-timey feel of it. For me some of the rhyming felt a bit ...

    alliyah
    alliyah - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Midnight Hippos, the rise of slice. Chapter two V1

    Hello, Falx here to review! So firstly, I must say, this is a very interesting story idea. I've seen dragons, cats, dogs, bears, and birds all anthropomorphized but I must ...

    FalconryGirl9086
    FalconryGirl9086 - 2 hours ago

  • Forums » Lounge, The
    Post Your Picture Here! [10]

    Apparently, I found some rare photos of myself lying around. I'm now a few months older and this was taken on a crappy camera, but I haven't changed much since ...

    TheSilverFox
    TheSilverFox - 2 hours ago

  • Storyboooks » Specific Storybook Discussion
    Battle School DT

    @Shota great post!! Alright, who's gonna post next? @Remembrance I know you're going cross country at the moment, but how's that template coming in? I'm sure you have a bit ...

    Remembrance
    Remembrance - 3 hours ago


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— Emily Dickinson