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I promise I'm working on this post, guys. For some reason my computer's having some trouble saving my progress so the going is slow.

Pretty nice. All the rhyming sounded natural, and you could hear the soldier's yearning for a normal world. Just a typo correction - it's 'peoples'', not 'people's''. I like how ...

That's 4am for me XD Would it be possible to do it on the weekend? Or does that not work for anyone? If so, I could probably make that time ...

Hello! A really good plot. I would just recommend a bit more emotion, maybe also a bit more description of Chessie and her sister so we can picture them. Maybe ...

Wow! Really cool. You can almost see it, the way you describe it - dancing in the mist, twirling about, your partner complimenting you on your eyes ... then he ...

Hey there PearlC10, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. Before I get started I would just like to welcome you to YWS, it's always great to see a new ...

This is a great piece of work which uses dialogue really well to create characters, as well as to make the story more engaging. I certainly didn't lose interest. However, ...

This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! What I'm most confused by here is the rhyme scheme. The main complaint I have there is that this isn't consistent. ...

Hello, interesting concept for a story, here are my critiques: 1) Why is there a random use of italics near the beginning, and why is some dialogue in italics and ...

Thanks! I'll try and review a lot in August, though.

Damn, I must've posted it in the SB by accident. Sorry about that.

Hi there! Congratulations on posting your first piece on the site! It's well-edited and I like the old-timey feel of it. For me some of the rhyming felt a bit ...

Hello, Falx here to review! So firstly, I must say, this is a very interesting story idea. I've seen dragons, cats, dogs, bears, and birds all anthropomorphized but I must ...

Apparently, I found some rare photos of myself lying around. I'm now a few months older and this was taken on a crappy camera, but I haven't changed much since ...

@Shota great post!! Alright, who's gonna post next? @Remembrance I know you're going cross country at the moment, but how's that template coming in? I'm sure you have a bit ...