Hello, Lumos! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! First I will answer your question that you have at the end. First, the ending was definitely something ...

Thank you! Oh my Gerd, I feel like I'm reapting myself so often here! Anyway, thanks and I will most certanly ask questions!

So, before I make my review, I'm going to answer your questions. To the first one, I liked the ending very much, it was a little sad and I also ...

@Feltrix again, no rush, but how's your post coming along?

Fair enough. XD Our characters have similarities, for sure. Either one would fit the situation, though yours probably better.

Honestly, I'm not usually into romantic things, so when I say this is good you better believe I thought this was good. It was sweet and to the point. I ...

Okay, wow. Just, wow. That was halarious, creepy, and heart warming all at once. It was glorious, that's all I got to say is glorious. The only thing I saw ...

Star wakes up, fully recovered, and winds up in a confrontation with Maeve.

Mm, this is a sad poem. There are so many things that this is akin to: depression, anxiety, paranoia, mental differences, even just learning something new. I think it's really ...

Hello Just Perks, I'm really happy to see you're writing poetry, and that you're not feeling stuck to line caps or end punctuation! That's always a breath of relief at ...

What's up buttercup? This is Kays here dropping in for a review as requested (I'm finally getting off my lazy butt just for you. I don't have the energy but ...

Reflection and evaluation of someone or something.

@LeftyWriter: Nice idea! It makes perfect sense to me, as the organization in charge is best leaving the kids as compliant as possible. The less the kids resist, the more ...

Kinda strange poem that I wrong kinda quickly...Enjoy!

This is, essentially, a piece about emotions and how helping someone else can also help you.

Okay, I really like this! Especially, the part where you say, "A new tree grows The new leaves fall And the cylce starts again," (16-18 Tylexie). I like the portrayal ...