Hey, Luke here for a short review! So, first of all, welcome to YWS! I’m sure you’ll enjoy it here, it’s really great for feedback on literature, and the atmosphere’s ...

A piece I wrote as an assignment, but one that I like nonetheless.

Hey Shady! Wow I'm back already I know it's a Christmas miracle but I want to TRY to catch up on reviewing even a little so let's see if I ...

THis isn't exactly a typical review of mine, just some things I want to keep in mind and ask you when I review the other parts of this series — ...

Hey Shady!! OKAY I'm finally back to review yay

Reading the title of this story again after I finished this chapter scared me into what this could possibly be. Unfinished?.... Well, I guess the whole Mason thing is over, ...

Man, at this point it isn't a review, even if I check the box that way so I can get points lmao I'm just here to follow up with your ...

This is so sincere and poignant and relatable. So many small details have private meaning or are inside jokes, and this adds so much more emotional depth to the piece. ...

Hi lukekazey! Cat here for a review c: I really love the simplicity and calm beauty of the piece. It's quite cute c: Some of your thoughts are a little ...

Absolutely beautiful! I love how it is divided, and how it all comes back to "What will you do?" The imagery was great, and I could definitely feel the love ...

Beautifully written piece. The title prepares the reader for a sadder piece, before suddenly disaster strikes. The only question I can think of is concerning the choice of metaphors. Comparing ...

Hey Traves! One Trial By Fire coming up. I'm gonna pick every sentence apart so it may feel like a lot of criticism but mostly it's just pulling up weeds ...

Hey! I'm just going to go paragraph by paragraph with this review. Let's get started! The man’s lumpy voice reminded Dell of curdled milk. The only person Dell knew that ...

Hey! Wow! It's not often that a story strikes me as much as this one did. The visual imagery and the unique concept are really something. I like how you ...

Hi reaganmcchristy!! It Sophie here to review your piece! ~ Like the others said, I think it is a brilliant idea to have the works cited because it gives credit ...

In which everything changes. (LMS, 1957 words)