The introduction is certainly attention-grabbing. I think it's great for making a new reader continue to read on, like a hooker in an essay. Because it's the beginning, it will ...

Hey Softballgirl333! Katja here to review your poem! As always please feel free to disregard any comments or suggestions I make if you find them unhelpful. That being said, let's ...

Hey Aari, DrFeelGood here to review your unusual piece. Let's dive into this piece shall we? Plot I am a little puzzled with the intention of this piece. It starts ...

Hi Dahlia, I really enjoyed reading this mini story. It's melancholy and sweet, and I love the fairy tale vibes. I do have some questions that you might consider addressing ...

Alright. Interesting. Not my perspective for sure, but completely valid. I liked how you rhymed some lines but not all of them-- excessive rhyming can be annoying. "On the oh-so ...

Making children recite the Pledge of Allegiance is creepy. It's creepy.

How’s it going @HazelGrace16?

Technically on & off, but back? IDK I hope I stay long enough this time!

If anyone's looking for a new collab pad! I created one with a new pad site that someone discovered? Not sure who, but it seems legit. It's pretty similar to ...

Something Short and not-so-sweet about winter!

Hey, no nit-picks really. Most specific thing is a whole paragraph which there's not much point in quoting. That paragraph is the last one. It's kind of a jolt in ...

Hi again, still not midnight and I'm 3 reviews away from 5 blue stars... Why did there always have to be stupid fucking metaphors like this in the pathway to ...

Hiya, just waiting til midnight so I can start this week's LMS, thought I'd do some reviewing: He avoided a tasteless joke about sailors while adding the name to his ...

I wanna write LMS but it's still several hours til midnight *grumbles*

Imagine the worst place you could be during an earthquake. Now imagine you were naked.

Hi, Zaibae. This is Aari, and I read your poem and just wanted to let you know what a great job you did. Although, I have one feedback for you: ...