The June-July vacation is coming up, so we ought to restart during then. I personally know I can dive back into this forum after June 8th.

"Family" dinner time.

Heyo, Katnes! I'm Evander here for a quick review. The first thing that I noticed is that the paragraphs are long . Long paragraphs can make it difficult for the ...

Hey ChristianKeener, Shady here with a review for you! I see you're new to the site, so a great big welcome to you! If you need any help finding your ...

I was holding a knife, a beautiful, golden thing studded with rubies. But it was stained. The knife was covered in smooth, crimson blood.

Hey CoffeeCat, Shady here with a review for you! As you requested help on punctuation as well as whether this is interesting enough to continue, that is where I will ...

Hey Lupin, Shady here with a quick review for you! Usually I read through a story and give critiques as I find them, but after reading all the way through ...

Hey Radrook, Shady here to rescue your poem from the Green Room! A quick disclaimer, I am not overly experienced with poetry. I can point out things that I did ...

@corvidconvalescence Maybe our group can find your character and they join the group? A relative of an existing character could be a good way for them to join and be ...

Hey sarasanfran, Shady here with a review for you! I see you're new to the site, so a great big welcome to you! If you need any help finding where ...

Hey elysian! Shady here with a review for you! My first gut-reaction is to really like this story. You started it off very well, and I like the tone of ...

I might post a profile for Avery and start writing him. Thoughts?

Hi elysian! Thanks for requesting a review, and I hope this helps! First Thoughts I like this idea. Stories playing on what happens after death is a topic that never ...

Sierra I nodded at Adri before walking back over to Riley and Avery. "I can't stay, I pretty much only came back here to give someone a way to contact ...

Uhhhh school drama is happening. No one insults Mia in front of Finnley.

the speaker reflects on the dwindling innocent of life at age 12, and the love of somebody close