Hello! I really love what you have here. There are so many good ideas, and it was pieces of a puzzle finally set together all at once in the last ...

I promise this is the last part of chapter 1 :P Mum takes control.

Ciel has sought shelter in a vampire's house after narrowly escaping murder at another monster's fangs. Tired, hurt, she doesn't know what to expect.

Hi, @Blairwood. Ahhhhhhhh, a fan-story, that brings me back…It’s pretty damn cute too. I think it would be even better if you told it with original characters and a couple ...

Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a few things to say about your poem, I'll try to make it short. i will also try and help get this work out the green ...

Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a short review for you on this lovely day, I will also try to help get your work out the green room. Let's get started. So ...

Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a short review for you on your work on this lovely day, and to help get your work out the green room. Let's begin. Let me ...

YAY FINALLY *runs off to read*

Hello @EagleFly! Anma here to review! This is really good! The way you started it out was fantastic! I was really into this peace while reading. Before I get started ...

I'd like to claim three credits for completing the challenge for In Service to the Hierophant ! Additionally, I'd like to claim credits for the Captain's Challenge! •For the 2 ...

Hello Avery! I hope you don't mind me shortning your user name... Lol, anyway.......................... This is great! I really like it! You were so realistic and I can totally compare ...

Hello, I liked your other poem "Saga of Love" and I also like this one! The major difference I see is in the tone. In this one, the character seems ...

Rumishu – The Color of Home: Prelude “ In the eyes of a lone one, the color of Home takes many shades. ” It was the beginning sentence of a ...

Hey, decided to take a break from Doctor Who and come review this! Nit-picks and nice moments: Ethan pulled out of the parking lot as Rhys walked towards the church ...

Like Gnomish said, not too much to say about this one. Mostly, it was grammar errors, such as, in the entire conversation between them and the girls, there were no ...

Hi! Manilla here for a review. Let's get right into it, shall we? As a reader This was absolutely breathtaking! In such a short space, you painted a brilliant picture ...