Hello Mage!! Here to drop off a hopefully not too time consuming and/or boring review. Let's START. Okay. So much has happened since I last reviewed, I don't know where ...

Good story. This is a sketch for a big book, I think. Stories of authoritarian governments are becoming more popular. I will be poorly useful in grammar. Therefore, I join ...

I'm writing. Join me.

Hey alliyah! This is a lot to unpack, but I really want to try and take a stab at it; the writing really just stood out to me and I ...

1,776 words -- a little flashback

A song of sorts, though I don’t have time to make it a proper song. I wrote you letters from a madhouse That I’m glad you’ll never read ‘Cause your ...

Well done! Fantastic energy and much appreciated enthusiasm. Very well-deserved. :D

Hi! I actually haven't read this chapter before, so I'll be looking at everything for the first time. I'll read and give comments/critiques as I go, then give my final ...

Hey there Hkumar! Tuck dropping by with a review for you today. Overall, you used some strong description here by using specific verbs and nouns. I found that to be ...

I don't know if this really qualifies as a "short story" anymore, but it's not exactly a novel either...

I LOVE sweet "cinnamon roll" characters. Anyone know what i'm talking about? I feel like it makes for a more impactfull story when the main charcter gets hurt really bad ...

Hey Mira! Hope you're doing well today or tonight. I'm here to review this work, help get this out of the Green Room, and obviously to figure out what happens ...

I tend to use the past tense in more fantasy-esque stories, although my nano project from last year was in the third person, present tense to serve as a challenge ...

Another thing to consider for retellings can be how you want to form these characters, especially in the title piece of Medusa. This all goes into what kind of setting/storyline ...

Hello Madagascar, I'm going to review this piece with a few simple bullet points of strengths / opportunities and ignore nitpicks involving grammar & punctuation. Strengths: -You've introduced central

Hello, everyone. I was wondering if somone could help me with an idea.... Anything goes... What would a villen (a zookeeper gone "bad" or scientist. Havn't decided) want with a ...