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Literary Spotlight

nostaligia i've kept under my bed
by chikara in Poetry » Dramatic


Goodbyes
by ForeverYoung299 in Poetry » Realistic


All petals are about to fall
by ForeverYoung299 in Poetry » Realistic


Lost time
by BrokenHeartsAri in Poetry » Romantic


Flower
by ForeverYoung299 in Poetry » Literature


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  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    The world

    Hi! How are you? Just wanted to say that this is such a deep, beautiful piece of writing! The only thing I could wish was that it was longer! The ...

    WishIHadASword
    WishIHadASword - 45 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, General
    nostaligia i've kept under my bed

    I hope ya'll are doing well today and having a wonderful morning/day/night wherever you are! I felt obligated to review this because I can definitely relate to nostalgia as I'm ...

    WishIHadASword
    WishIHadASword - 48 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Humor, General
    The Crepe and the Pancake

    Hey, how are you doing? You should be doing well because this is the BEST! It was so funny and cute, I just love it! I love the conversation between ...

    WishIHadASword
    WishIHadASword - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Other
    numb

    Hello, how are you all doing? I hope everything's going well for you wherever you are! I'm here today because I really want you to know how much I love ...

    WishIHadASword
    WishIHadASword - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction
    The Augury of RiverClan = 5.0

    AHHHHHH IT'S HERE .> Quickflash is always so supportive of everyone else - I'm glad someone has Riverpaw's back Bicker, bicker, bicker, that's all that mangy old tom does anymore, ...

    starlitmind
    starlitmind - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Humor, General
    The Crepe and the Pancake

    Hello Niveda! hannah here for a review, as requested. Hope it is helpful! Grows: "When a little girl did dart Into the kitchen." You don't need to capitalize the beginning ...

    hannah0528
    hannah0528 - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    The Mountain (5)

    Hey zekcede! Zenith here for a short review. I would start by saying that all of the useful suggestions I had to offer(which weren't much to begin with) had already ...

    Zenith
    Zenith - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    The world

    Hey akanbright! Zenith here for a review. Your poem falls in the short and sweet category. I like the main theme that you've tried to portray. The world is indeed ...

    Zenith
    Zenith - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General
    The Long, Brutal, Complex, Violent History of Tlelk and Gentleman's Guide

    Hi cidrianwritersguild, Mailice here with a short review! :D First, what many here will probably say when they see this mountain of text; why don't you split it up? But ...

    MailicedeNamedy
    MailicedeNamedy - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Dramatic
    Flower

    Hi ForeverYoung! You did a really great job with this sonnet, and I feel like your poetry has come so far already! I loved the repetition of "a flower shines" ...

    quitecontrary
    quitecontrary - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Conquest of Shadows Chapter 10

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! I noticed this piece was still in the green room and decided to bump it out! I really enjoyed this segment of the ...

    Plume
    Plume - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Dramatic
    Flower

    Ahhh such a beautiful background I'll organise this review so it's easier for the two of us :D Firstly, whether or not it fits the characteristics of a sonnet. Little ...

    stygianmoon17
    stygianmoon17 - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Literature, Dramatic
    Flower

    Wow, for a start that was amazing ; great effort for your first sonnet indeed. I may not be able to give the best critic, I am not very familiar ...

    YourFriendQuirks08
    YourFriendQuirks08 - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Fantasy, Other
    Brawn

    Yessssss I completely agree with you and your poem! Why should the hero always be good? The person can be a bad one and that is what makes a good ...

    ForeverYoung299
    ForeverYoung299 - 18 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Narrative
    Corrupt Ghosts

    A tale chilling to the bone! Shut up, that can be used to describe things other than temperature. The thing that sticks out to us the most about this is ...

    cidrianwritersguild
    cidrianwritersguild - 21 hours ago


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