“Aw, shucks.” She laughed. “I didn’t know you thought so highly of me, Luca! ‘Weirdo’ this, ‘snake girl’ that.” Melody sounded like she was mocking him, with her false falsetto, ...

WOW his mom is...not a nice mom. Although to be fair to her, you don't really expect to have a child who grows flowers through his skin. Like, parenting is ...

I’ll get popcorn and peanuts when I join the circus. This is just such a kid thing to plan, running off to the circus omg “Luca, acting as your guardian, ...

OMG BRB GOTTA GO READ THE REST OF THIS Luca smiled, in spite of his face hurting like a swarm of bees had all targeted him. Which they probably do, ...

Hey @Casanova! Stella here for a review. I really liked this poem - I went back and read the other two of the series that I could see to get ...

Wow, this chapter is super short. Adding on to what Rosey said, after reading the last two chapters it seems too short simply because the last two chapters were so ...

Once you grow up, you will look just like you do now. Wow, that's going to be a shock for poor Lilith when her daughter grows up looking like her ...

Hello! Aulyasela3597 is here for a slight review :) I really do like how you put the idea of Feminism into a poem. I could see clearly : Objectification, Gender ...

Okay, I really just came here to read the rest of the story before I review Chapter 3 out of the Green Room for you, but I'm surprised no one ...

...I think I somehow missed this chapter? But I read and reviewed the next one. Hmmm. Well, anyway. Now that I’m sitting still, I start to worry a little. I ...

Hello :) I'm Relaxistence88. First, thank you for making this poem and sharing it to everyone! This is the first time ever I've read this beautiful poem. This poem literally ...

Hello, I'm Relaxistence88, I would like to give a review. I think this is the first time ever I've seen and read an essay comparing the education systems in countries. ...

Hello. For starters, you have a lot of dialogue punctuation issues in here. I'd suggest reading this article and rereading this with an eye towards fixing the grammar. It'll make ...

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Hello hello! I'm here to review your lovely poem!!!! First up! everyone's favorite part, the parts I liked! I loved the rhyme scheme! It felt different with every other line ...