Hello! I really love what you have here. There are so many good ideas, and it was pieces of a puzzle finally set together all at once in the last ...

Hi, @Blairwood. Ahhhhhhhh, a fan-story, that brings me back…It’s pretty damn cute too. I think it would be even better if you told it with original characters and a couple ...

Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a few things to say about your poem, I'll try to make it short. i will also try and help get this work out the green ...

Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a short review for you on this lovely day, I will also try to help get your work out the green room. Let's get started. So ...

Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a short review for you on your work on this lovely day, and to help get your work out the green room. Let's begin. Let me ...

Hello @EagleFly! Anma here to review! This is really good! The way you started it out was fantastic! I was really into this peace while reading. Before I get started ...

Hello Avery! I hope you don't mind me shortning your user name... Lol, anyway.......................... This is great! I really like it! You were so realistic and I can totally compare ...

Hello, I liked your other poem "Saga of Love" and I also like this one! The major difference I see is in the tone. In this one, the character seems ...

Hey, decided to take a break from Doctor Who and come review this! Nit-picks and nice moments: Ethan pulled out of the parking lot as Rhys walked towards the church ...

Like Gnomish said, not too much to say about this one. Mostly, it was grammar errors, such as, in the entire conversation between them and the girls, there were no ...

Hi! Manilla here for a review. Let's get right into it, shall we? As a reader This was absolutely breathtaking! In such a short space, you painted a brilliant picture ...

Heyo, I’m back! I liked this poem a bit better than the last one, because of the dark-ish turn, and it ended better in my opinion. One small critique I ...

Hai, I’m here to review dis! First off, this is an amazing remarkable poem that flows very well and I really liked it because it’s relateable to a lot of ...

Greetings! Artsy here to give you a quick review. Hope you are doing well today. The emotions you express are wonderful. I love how you describe everything. The rhyming, by ...

Hello! Liberty here to drop off a quick review, let's get right into it now, shall we? Alright, so, this is so good! I love the emotion that you put ...