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Literary Spotlight

when will you believe it for yourself?
by soundofmind in Poetry » General


a loss
by soundofmind in Poetry » General


"Lonely" and "Trusting"
by LJF in Poetry » Realistic


The Grateful Immigrant ​
by Radrook in Short Story » Dramatic


​Wings
by Radrook in Poetry » Dramatic


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  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Metal

    Thanks for sharing this lamentation concerning your own existence. The misery felt is very effectively conveyed in the expressions used. There is no shred of hope mentioned that would mar ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Literature, General
    Wordsmithing: The Comma Needs To Go! [Revised]

    Thanks for sharing this very thought-provoking essay. Your logic is very compelling since it repeatedly exposes the fallacy of inconsistency of policy. Why require something now and not then? Why ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 1 of Princess of the Sea

    I happen to have read the original "The Little Mermaid" by Hans Christian Anderson several times, most recently just a few weeks ago, so I have a little more context ...

    LJF
    LJF - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, Action / Adventure
    Apples and cinnamon

    Hey there! Iggy coming at you with a review

    Iggy
    Iggy - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Horror, Realistic
    I'm Leaving Home

    Hi DemonGoddess! Here is your review as promised. I think this story has a lot of potential. I was interested to see what you would do with it since this ...

    Elinor
    Elinor - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Angel Wings and a Small Flame: Chapter 1

    This chapter struggles a lot with info-dump. In almost every situation, it is boring to read paragraphs of information, such as the one that started with, "Angels and humans coexisted ...

    Emberly
    Emberly - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense
    Kimandra Loval Chapter one

    Thanks for sharing this fascinating introduction to to a novel. You did an excellent job in making the protagonist come to life by describing her physical appearance, her fears, the ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy
    Chapter 13 of Princess of the Sea

    Love it!! The part where you talked about Lord Tiernan and how he hated carriages was a tiny bit confusing. If it were me I would say something like the ...

    camusic
    camusic - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Seltas's first kill

    Hey there friend, you requested a review - so here I am. :) I'm going to go through the piece and just point out a few areas that I had ...

    alliyah
    alliyah - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    In Your eyes

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, ...

    Flumadiddle
    Flumadiddle - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Metal

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, ...

    Flumadiddle
    Flumadiddle - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    when will you believe it for yourself?

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, ...

    Flumadiddle
    Flumadiddle - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Politics, Dramatic
    A Feminist's Love Story

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, ...

    Flumadiddle
    Flumadiddle - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 26.1

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I didn't have any problems with this section, so I'll move onto the other parts of ...

    saentiel
    saentiel - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Chapter 12.1 (You Can't Go Home, But You Can't Stay Here)

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I didn't have any problems with the grammar itself, but I thought this would be the ...

    saentiel
    saentiel - 6 hours ago


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