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Teardrops
by KaiRyu in Poetry » Lyrical


how do you like your blue-eyed boy, mister death
by LadySpark in Poetry » General


The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 7.2
by BlueAfrica in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


The red dress
by Casanova in Poetry » Romantic


(v.) to clear of impurity
by Sassafras in Poetry » Narrative


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  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    Fried Expectations

    I loved the humor in this story. The way that your narrator talks is very fun to read! I also like that it feels real, like your old friend is ...

    DogFruit
    DogFruit - 25 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Other, General
    Snow Globes

    Hello FallWolf. So interesting premise you have here! It makes me wonder if Noma and her mummy are in snow globes. And the snow that keeps falling down, down, down. ...

    PrincessInk
    PrincessInk - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic
    Sleep

    I love how dark this is. I am a huge fan of the lone statements, paired with the time tag. It's not a huge deal, but maybe you should put ...

    MarianaChristena
    MarianaChristena - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Teardrops

    I loved this, like a lot. There are a couple places where the phrasing is a little awkward, but nothing too big. "Yet at a young age she had that ...

    MarianaChristena
    MarianaChristena - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Prologue

    This was a really great beginning. There were a few grammar mistakes that I noticed, such as sentence fragments and capitalization errors, but nothing too bad. I love how you ...

    MarianaChristena
    MarianaChristena - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Prologue

    Hey! Nice story. I do have a few comments to make though. The beginning is good, keeps you interested. It makes you wonder why the character is in so much ...

    SubSubLibrarian
    SubSubLibrarian - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, General
    #shehatestwitter

    Hey, KatGirl! Quick exposition on how I take things too seriously, I nitpick, and I'm basically annoying when it comes to reviews. Sorry. I'm interpreting this as a manuscript. Since ...

    Aleta
    Aleta - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Script » Dramatic, Humor
    I luv u le sparkilievampie

    Hello, Katgirl! One, I am sorry if this review offends you at all. I do not mean to be harsh. Two, my reviews tend to ask a lot of questions ...

    Aleta
    Aleta - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Other
    (v.) to clear of impurity

    I think it's a good attempt, with a unique style, though I cannot tell which elements are stylistic choices that are attached to the themes of the poem, if something ...

    Timasaurus007
    Timasaurus007 - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Narrative, Health
    i spy with my little eye...

    Hi, Sophie! I like the idea you have for this because honestly, people are sooo caught up in technology and themselves, I do agree with this girl. Some things in ...

    rosette
    rosette - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Narratives of Kaos Book 1: Mystique Chapter One: Chris Lasiter

    Hi, J here for a review. WELCOME TO YWS!!! I hope you continue to get involved in everything that YWS has to offer. If you have any questions feel free ...

    Jurelixranoanad
    Jurelixranoanad - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Technology
    destination f*cked

    Hi passenger, Becca here for a quick review. You should know, that this is the best thing I've read all week. I think you execute the extended metaphor perfectly. I'm ...

    beccalicious94
    beccalicious94 - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    The red dress

    Hello fellow Knight! I'm going to start with some general observations as I read through and then I'll give overall thoughts at the end. I could do it the other ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Narratives of Kaos Book 1: Mystique Chapter One: Chris Lasiter

    Hello there! Inky, dropping for a review :) I hope you find what I say helpful, and that I don't offend you in any way. These are all my own ...

    scribbleinks
    scribbleinks - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Not Always

    Hi there! good poem! I only have a few suggestions. First off, Structure. "Not always the world is beautiful Not always the mind is zestful Not always the mood is ...

    Midnightmoon
    Midnightmoon - 9 hours ago


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