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Literary Spotlight

The Sunny Day
by anne27 in Poetry » Narrative


credit card applications as a metaphor
by Mageheart in Poetry » Realistic


The Last Spell - Chapter 4.1
by SilverNight in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


kindred
by spatula in Poetry » Dramatic


LoaMR: Ch.XX: Virchow 1
by MailicedeNamedy in Novel / Chapter » Literature


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 1.1

    Hi there Harry! Lim again with a review. First Impressions I think the thing that stands out the most to me in this chapter and gets me the most curious ...

    Liminality
    Liminality - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, General
    The Sunny Day

    Haha! Cute poem. The sun knows that it’s an important source to bring joy. Who knows? Maybe it will, ”Brighten someone’s day!” I am one of those people who prefer ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, General
    The Rainbow Connection

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, "And some day we'll find ...

    HarryHardy
    HarryHardy - 22 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Song

    This is an interesting little thing that you wrote. The title is “Song” and the actual writing piece talks about being afraid of the end. Could it be that the ...

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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    LMS VI: Silver and Silk 0.4

    Heyyyy omnomnomnomnomnomnomnomnom! I'm back again with another review, so let's just get right into it! (But before we do, please make sure to smash that like button and click that ...

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  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    White Cop (sonnet)

    Hi this is gem writing his review. I am rusty so take it easy on me XD! This was an interesting piece. It speaks about police brutality and how everything ...

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  • Reviews » Short Story » Realistic, General
    Selling happiness

    This story was very meaningful. Cehyn works to make the lives of others better, but in the end, she is only human. She cannot cure everyone. It is up to ...

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  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    The Fire

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, Across the room, his eyes ...

    HarryHardy
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  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy
    passed away

    Hey this is gem writing his review! I am rusty so take it easy on me XD. I love this poem it took me a while to figure out the ...

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  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy
    passed away

    Why was this so freaking beautiful??????? Where did you learn to write such masterpieces? The only thing I picked up was you say as he is summons which kinda sounds ...

    MyKingdomOfRuins
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  • Reviews » Art » Review, Film
    Movie Review: From Up on Poppy Hill

    Heyo, this sounds like a nice movie! Firstly, there is a typo in the sentences: Despite his death, Umi still raises flags everuday in the signs her father taught her. ...

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  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    I

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, This is the diary of ...

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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 2.2

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! Ah, so it was a teaching moment! I loved meeting Adelia (I'm curious if her name is related to code at all or ...

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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    LMS VI: Silver and Silk 0.4

    I noticed a pattern of lengthy sentences and telling, not showing. You have a capability to describe surroundings so that the reader understands what is happening. Each next step the ...

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  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Emotions

    This poem was so cute! I like how the message leads to a point where one must be careful with someone so that they don’t let their emotions change them ...

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