I love the descriptions you used for the fire, and the streets. You did a really good job setting the mood. "My mom used to say names held power, stories, ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two ...

This. Is. Perfection. The fact that you used such a charming story to convey such a beautiful message is really the strong point of this piece! In the beginning, we ...

This was a truly heart-rending piece. I was hooked since I read the opening note and throughout the story I felt so many emotions which finally culminated into warmth, joy ...

Hiiiii!! I like how everything is starting to come together now! We've been introduced to Daishan now and his friends, Zary and Saviel! Your desciptions were spot on! I loved ...

Hey, Euphoria here! I enjoyed this poem so much! I like that you haven't written about winter itself, but rather, the transition from fall to winter! One thing I love ...

Hola! Here to conquer your words & polish your thoughts. I love this essay! I too share the same interest but with a different book. I haven't really read Hunger ...

Not a review, more of a comment. 1) I think you posted this in the debate forum? That’s where I found it. I don’t know how many active users go ...

Hi Vil! This is a really fun retelling of history. It sounds to me like the beginning of a novel told by a sassy narrator. There are a couple of ...

I can't believe you did this to me. D: I mean I can, but... imma brb. [ walks away ] hello i am back So this was full of feels ...

Wow! This piece was absolutely amazing. You did a great job building tension, especially with a topic that isn’t about life or death or love. It’s a relatively simple piece, ...

First off, I love the use of the word azure! It’s so interesting and fun, quite a contrast to the bland “blue” usually used in describing the sky. I also ...

I love how you portray Ares in this. It's the way ancient Greeks actually viewed him. Like, nowadays people see him as this warmongering psychopath who just want endless war, ...

Hey Vil, Morri here to review your piece. The first thing I noticed about this piece is that it's extremely biased. Reading through RavenLord's review, I think that they could ...

I loved how the narrator is talking to me because it feels so personal. You did such a good job of portraying the tension and awkward silence. The silent taboo ...