Hello Flumadiddle! Welcome to YWS! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review! Give me your soul. With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go! Bold ...

I enjoyed reading this because of the mysterious mood created at the outset. I wanted to know what was causing the blindness. I liked the visual imagery references to fireflies, ...

Hello, marms! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...

Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, ...

Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

Hello, jamgalloway! It’s Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review! Give me your soul. With that aside... STOP! Grammar time! I'm just going to mark the ones I can with ...

*Waves* HoI there, KaiRyu here for a review! ^-^ I haven't done this in a while, so please bear with me... "However the dwarf had walked the same path between ...

Hello, irsyad23! It’s Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review! Give me your soul. With that aside... STOP! Grammar time! I'm just going to mark the ones I can with ...

Hi ChocolateCello! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

Hi popsicles! Welcome to YWS! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what ...

Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

Hello Flumadiddle! Welcome to YWS! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review! Give me your soul. With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go! Bold ...

Hello, E.E for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets ...

Hello, E.E for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets ...

Hello, E.E for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets ...