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Because Because Because
by DarkPandemonium in Short Story » Realistic


summer is for lost souls, white-knuckled punches, and braided hair
by Kays in Poetry » Realistic


i am
by marms in Poetry » Narrative


metes
by JustPerks in Poetry » General


How to Catch a Shooting Star
by Poopsie in Poetry » Romantic


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor
    The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 14.1

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I didn't have any problems with the overall grammar, so I'll move onto the rest of the chapter. I ...

    saentiel
    saentiel - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    Mislead to Love

    Hello EmilyRMaiorano! I'm stopping by for a quick review! I like your poem and the idea behind it. So many people talk about love being the driving force of life, ...

    RainaDee
    RainaDee - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    Mislead to Love

    Hey there EmilyRMaiorano, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. I do not believe in love Place a period here. I think that having this line as a single sentence ...

    myjaspercat
    myjaspercat - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Satire
    Insubstáncial

    Hi there! First of all, I really like how the poem is set out. The way you start each stanza with a different age, and gradually increase the ages from ...

    KayLou1609
    KayLou1609 - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, General
    The Fire Underneath of Things - 26

    You know, when we first met Alder, he legit seemed like a crazy, fire-and-brimstone sort of old dude. I honestly thought he might turn out to be a bad guy ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    Conics Unfortunately: 26

    Alienated. I see what you did there. (I also liked Oval.) “That is no excuse for bad nutrition. Being in a wheelchair does not mean you are incapable of being ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Dramatic, General
    Heart and Soul

    Hi Nymeria! (I love your username!!) Man, for a brief plot description of a short film this held a lot of tension and emotion. That's a fantastic place to start! ...

    Lauren2010
    Lauren2010 - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 13.1

    "No, Mia," Uncle Fred replied, equally softly but with a spark of something in his voice. "We're monster hunters." *queue Supernatural theme song* I probably would've liked Uncle Fred to ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural
    Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 31 & 32

    You’ll eat any kind of cake but think red velvet is just fake chocolate. Smart cookie, that Elijah. Red velvet is chocolate cake dyed red, and it's disgusting. ANYWAY. On ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 13.2

    AWESOME, Monica finally gets to shine. I'm excited to see where this goes next. You did a much better job with suspense and emotion in this chapter - even before ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Realistic, Other
    Marnin

    Hello! I thought this was a very promising premise for a story, and a very impressive effort considering you only had a day to write it. Generally, I felt like ...

    TriSARAHtops
    TriSARAHtops - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 13.2

    Hey, I'm here to review! All in all, this chapter is solid, as usual. I like how you keep the suspense of the driving by giving them a few moments ...

    Lightsong
    Lightsong - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    summer is for lost souls, white-knuckled punches, and braided hair

    This poem of yours was excellent, as usual. I guess it was not written in your usual style, but had the magical Kays touch anyway. Beauty, realism and dreams shone ...

    DarshayataDeka
    DarshayataDeka - 14 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Arrow Under the Moonlight

    Hey, Light. I try to keep my promises, even though they come in months later lol. Let's proceed with the notes I got. -I noticed from the beginning that the ...

    outvaders
    outvaders - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 10.3

    Hey Mea! Sorry for the delay--I meant to review earlier but got busy instead. It's lovely to see Ayda with her mother, to see the changes that these events wrought ...

    PrincessInk
    PrincessInk - 17 hours ago


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