First of all great poem Queenie. The poem clearly brings to limelight the struggles of a toxic relationship in which you are the only one willing to keep things working ...

A sad poem with a sinister background. You don't really have to read between the lines to see how much someone struggles for love and at the same time gets ...

Hey there! :3 I really felt this and wanted to give it a review! I just wanted to show how much I really appreciated your work. this is victory. this ...

Heyo! This poem almost made me say "Yes ma'am, I'll grab you a coffee ma'am!" like a silly, little robot XD! Anyhow, but at the end of yesterday i needed ...

Hey! First off, I really like how you started with Living in harmony, Yet I don't know if the second line should be a question also or not. is that ...

Hi Tazim! Welcome to YWS :) I'll be commenting mainly on the writing of your piece, since I think you have a decently developed idea for your story. The main ...

Hello there! I haven't read many of your works yet, but I love your word choice! You paint a vivid picture and draw me into this fairytale world, but there's ...

Hi lillianna! I just wanted to say that I really love this poem. It carries so much emotion with it which is incredible. It also holds an evolution to it ...

Hi QueenShadowGem! OMG I really love this! I can totally relate to the whole coffee obsession. Coffee is life! I really like how the form of the poem just reflects ...

Hello there, I don't know if I can follow up with as stellar a review as starlitmind's below, but I'll take a shot. Short-and-sweet poems are always the most challenging, ...

Hi there raindrops! I'm here for one last review for you ^^ I'm starting to think I was wrong about the narrator currently being a newborn baby? Because last I ...

Hi there! I think this poem is quite interesting because it speaks to nascent curiosity about makeup, looking up to an older sister (at least, I presumed it's an older ...

Heyo! I'm back, just a bit late ;)

Hi! Spunky here to review! Grows: Him, his mind clearly in a time and place far from now. Saying "Him, his" isn't a really good way to put this sentence. ...

Hi! Spunky here to review! Grows: She looked back at the boy, who gave her a smile. Nancy pursed her lips as she thought about what to write back. “I’ve ...