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  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, General
    The Crucifixion and Resurrection

    Hey, it's ScytheMeister here for a review :) I chose this work to review, not knowing what would await me when I clicked onto it, but gosh! This work blew ...

    ScytheMeister
    ScytheMeister - 25 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Ordadus [1.2]

    Well, talk about having a fast inciting incident. :P Honestly, this was great and I'm sure I'm going to struggle finding anything to critique. I suppose it almost felt too ...

    Mea
    Mea - 26 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Spiritual, General
    The Crucifixion and Resurrection

    Hey,it's lily here for a review. Iamawriter you are indeed an amazing writer. I loved reading your poem with those rhymes you used. I would like to tell a few ...

    Lily708
    Lily708 - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    i am unafraid to die

    Hey Castor! It's Quill, here with a quick review. I'm usually a bit nitpicky, so I'll dive into that. I feel like punctuation changed around the second section -- it ...

    GoldenQuill
    GoldenQuill - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Tales: Chapter 1

    Yo! It is I HotSnowman here to most likely ramble :) I'd like to start by saying I did like your story but to be honest..did I scare you? I'm ...

    HotSnowman
    HotSnowman - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, General
    Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 1

    Hi there, I'm here as requested, and I gotta say, I really enjoyed this! There were some rough spots (which I'll get to in a minute), but overall, I think ...

    Lucrezia
    Lucrezia - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Tales: Chapter 1

    Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! So far I'm enjoying your story, for I like that you've decided to steer away from some fantasy clich├ęs, and that's good. Your tone ...

    SilverBerry
    SilverBerry - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic
    The Midwife's Aberrations

    Hi Penta, This was an amazing story! I didn't see ay grammatical errors, which is very commendable. It was well edited and certainly had a very clear logical thought process ...

    MJTucker
    MJTucker - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    and the sky is not filled with people.

    holy gosh didddly. Was this supposed to be dark? Because it certainly came off as that. Anyway, this is a review. To start, I do like some of the imagery ...

    Poopsie
    Poopsie - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic
    'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 6

    Yo, Braiden! I apologize in advance for not reading the previous chapters - I saw this guy in the green room and decided to drop in and give it a ...

    EternalRain
    EternalRain - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    mother.

    hi, this is a review. To start, I really liked the imagery in this piece. I especially liked the way you chose to describe the apparent relationship between the character ...

    Poopsie
    Poopsie - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Realistic, General
    Clowie

    Hi, TheLeakyPen! This was a great work and you have a lot of great ideas. You did a great job on developing the characters and their relationship. The story is ...

    MJTucker
    MJTucker - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, General
    tsunami treasures

    I love, love, love this. Such strong imagery, and while the organization of all the water metaphors don't necessarily line up, I think that's okay. It still flows well. Honestly, ...

    SkyeDreamer
    SkyeDreamer - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic
    Madly: Chapter 2

    Some small errors: 1. "Outside, in the dark," I believe you do not need the first comma after outside. 2. "Sleep seemed impossible, a small piece of his day that ...

    skylnn00writes
    skylnn00writes - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic
    The Midwife's Aberrations

    Hey Penta ! Just pkid here, dropping in for a quick review. This was a very chilling piece, dramatic yet humorous. I have a love-hate relationship with it. There was ...

    pkidchick
    pkidchick - 12 hours ago


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