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Season Cycle
by Rook in Poetry » General


The Reflection
by AuthenticallyAngie in Poetry » Narrative


Ghost Girls
by vampricone6783 in Short Story » Fantasy


Calamity and Her Whims, Chapter 2
by KocoCoko in Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction


The Spooky Squad | Chapter 2: Giggling Fit
by GengarIsBestBoy in Novel / Chapter » Supernatural


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense
    I Knew Chapter 15

    First of all, as someone who hasn't read previous chapters yet, you do a great job of drawing people into your story from anywhere in the series. I already look ...

    AuthenticallyAngie
    AuthenticallyAngie - 55 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Prologue - the day we met

    Ciel is back! Will Ciel remember Michael? It had been years since they had seen each other. Hopefully Ciel will remember him. If not, it will be like the day ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Season Cycle

    There's something whimsical to this, and yet the whimsy is set off by an edge. I want to say intuitively it is a rim-of-winter poem: Still flashing fire, but beneath ...

    Poor Imp
    Poor Imp - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Siren’s Desire-Part One

    Hey there! So, I just finished reading Part One of your story, "Siren's Desire," and I gotta tell you, it's pretty awesome! The whole idea of this legend about Israfel, ...

    Rose
    Rose - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Literature, Other
    On a couch (A stream of consciousness essay)

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is a wonderful piece here. That's honestly ...

    KateHardy
    KateHardy - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    The Last Spell 12.1

    hey silver! momo here with a review. i haven't written a review in a while, so apologies if this is really bad haha. i also haven't read previous chapters, but ...

    momonster
    momonster - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative
    Stones of Goodness

    Greetings from a fellow writing friend! Kaia here to spin by and give you a review. So here we have another one of Rinisha's infamous death fables. Okay, just joking. ...

    KaiaJersaga
    KaiaJersaga - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Ghost Girls

    I don't honestly even know where to begin reviewing here. This was an AWESOME piece. You have a very cool imagination to be able to come up with all of ...

    KaiaJersaga
    KaiaJersaga - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Hybrids: Chapter 10

    Ryan seems a bit testy, but she probably has her reasons. I wonder if Ryan will love Yagi the same way he feels about her. I’ll have to see. I ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    Greater than you Think

    Hey there! Spark here for a little review day review. Let's get into it! I like how you're directly addressing the reader as if they are in a conversation with ...

    LadySpark
    LadySpark - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Change: A Social Construct

    Hi Bear, Spark here to review. Let's get into it! Wow. Lot's going on here. I'm going to go through each poem individually, but review this from a more wholistic ...

    LadySpark
    LadySpark - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    A spider and a power game

    Hi Forever! Let's get into it First off, I love this metaphor of spiders and power. I really enjoy this poem in its entirety but there are some beautiful lines ...

    LadySpark
    LadySpark - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Writing Like I'm Running Out of Time

    Hey there! I saw you review my poem so I am going to review yours too c:. If you don't remember me, this is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am ...

    loveissourgrapes
    loveissourgrapes - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Dramatic
    The Mystery to Address

    Hi Harray, You've got a lot going on here and I think you've got a great overall question and theme going for you. Curiousity is a great trait to have ...

    LadySpark
    LadySpark - May 28, 2023

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Romantic
    Pitch black

    Hi Cage, let's get down to it. I like the direction you're going with this poem, as comparative metaphors can be really compelling. I'm also a really big fan of ...

    LadySpark
    LadySpark - May 28, 2023


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