Hey Carlito, I don't have too much else to say about this chapter that I didn't tell you in the previous two. The one thing I will say that I've ...

Hey Carlito! I liked this chapter a lot. I liked that May and Summer had a heart to heart. As I read more of this story, there's a podcast I ...

Hey there! Super excited to continue with this. I really like this chapter, and I really like the characters you've created. They're three dimensional and complex, and I'm invested in ...

Hello there! I was just wondering if all your chapters going to be this short? I understand that you're only still developing an idea but it'd be nice to see ...

I CONCUR, ISHA. I CONCUR. I shall get to that momentarily, though. This was pretty uneventful! But Shiloh deserved what she got from Isha. I couldn't help but cheer Isha ...

The essay is good overall, and lays out all the information, but there are some suggestions I would make. First I'd change 'basically parasitic' and take away the 'basically' and ...

I like the honesty! Since it's not really a narrative, and is very short, my critique is limited, but I would like to commend your ability to put your feelings ...

Hello hello I'm back! Your work is yet again the oldest in the Green Room. It's a shame this hasn't been getting more love though. It's a fun read! 1. ...

Hey there Liberty! Tuck stopping by for a short review :) The most striking thing about it… is the… smell! I don't think these ellipses really work here. It doesn't ...

Hello! I hope your having a good night! This was a really great poem, the wording was great, and the flow was really nice. I do think some figurative language ...

Hello, SubSubLibrarian! It's me, Horisun, obviously, here to do a review, obviously. I don't have much to say about this chapter, other than the fact that the characters seem to ...

Hello again. As stated in my previous review, I wanted to go over this next chapter before losing track of this story and what had happened previously. I think Emily ...

Hi there. I figured that since I reviewed this last part and am certainly attached to getting this out of the Green Room, I'd go ahead with the next section. ...

Heyooo Carlitooo! Hope you're doing well today or tonight, depending on what side of the world you're on, obviously. ;) I'm here to give you a review ! Let's get ...

Heya Carli! Hope you're doing well today or tonight, depending on what side of the world you're on, obviously. I'm here to give you a review! Let's get started, now, ...