The introduction is certainly attention-grabbing. I think it's great for making a new reader continue to read on, like a hooker in an essay. Because it's the beginning, it will ...

Hey Softballgirl333! Katja here to review your poem! As always please feel free to disregard any comments or suggestions I make if you find them unhelpful. That being said, let's ...

Hey Aari, DrFeelGood here to review your unusual piece. Let's dive into this piece shall we? Plot I am a little puzzled with the intention of this piece. It starts ...

Hi Dahlia, I really enjoyed reading this mini story. It's melancholy and sweet, and I love the fairy tale vibes. I do have some questions that you might consider addressing ...

Alright. Interesting. Not my perspective for sure, but completely valid. I liked how you rhymed some lines but not all of them-- excessive rhyming can be annoying. "On the oh-so ...

Hey, no nit-picks really. Most specific thing is a whole paragraph which there's not much point in quoting. That paragraph is the last one. It's kind of a jolt in ...

Hi again, still not midnight and I'm 3 reviews away from 5 blue stars... Why did there always have to be stupid fucking metaphors like this in the pathway to ...

Hiya, just waiting til midnight so I can start this week's LMS, thought I'd do some reviewing: He avoided a tasteless joke about sailors while adding the name to his ...

Hi, Zaibae. This is Aari, and I read your poem and just wanted to let you know what a great job you did. Although, I have one feedback for you: ...

WOW, this hit me hard. I really felt like I got punched in the gut with how powerful this was. You really talk about some deep topics. I love the ...

yes, I agree poems are a great way to dump your feelings:) I do the same thing! Now about your poem! I really like this because it was almost like ...

wow, the imagery here is mind-blowing. I really love this poem because it really warms my helpless romantic heart. I really liked the line: then heaven may yet surprise me, ...

Hi, this is Aari. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. I think it is such a sweet and short poem, and it captures such a pure moment and ...

Hello there! this is such a lovely yet sad poem. It is very depressing at parts, especially the part where the writer thinks that they are their own worse enemy. ...

Good morning, mel0! This is SUCH a cute poem, and your narration of this story is really well done. It was easy to picture everything happening, and the pacing worked ...