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Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
labyrinth of liesFirst of all great poem Queenie. The poem clearly brings to limelight the struggles of a toxic relationship in which you are the only one willing to keep things working ...
crazystar - 3 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
labyrinth of liesA sad poem with a sinister background. You don't really have to read between the lines to see how much someone struggles for love and at the same time gets ...
Mailice_de_Namedy - 3 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
RicochetHey there! :3 I really felt this and wanted to give it a review! I just wanted to show how much I really appreciated your work. this is victory. this ...
vanillavelvet13 - 4 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Health
Steam Off a CupHeyo! This poem almost made me say "Yes ma'am, I'll grab you a coffee ma'am!" like a silly, little robot XD! Anyhow, but at the end of yesterday i needed ...
vanillavelvet13 - 4 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Realistic
What is Harmony?Hey! First off, I really like how you started with Living in harmony, Yet I don't know if the second line should be a question also or not. is that ...
vanillavelvet13 - 5 hours ago
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Reviews » Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic
An imposter among usHi Tazim! Welcome to YWS :) I'll be commenting mainly on the writing of your piece, since I think you have a decently developed idea for your story. The main ...
SpiritedWolfe - 9 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
labyrinth of liesHello there! I haven't read many of your works yet, but I love your word choice! You paint a vivid picture and draw me into this fairytale world, but there's ...
quitecontrary - 9 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
lulubelleHi lillianna! I just wanted to say that I really love this poem. It carries so much emotion with it which is incredible. It also holds an evolution to it ...
Queenie - 11 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Health
Steam Off a CupHi QueenShadowGem! OMG I really love this! I can totally relate to the whole coffee obsession. Coffee is life! I really like how the form of the poem just reflects ...
Queenie - 11 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » General, General
Late BloomersHello there, I don't know if I can follow up with as stellar a review as starlitmind's below, but I'll take a shot. Short-and-sweet poems are always the most challenging, ...
Lavvie - 11 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
Entropy - Chapter ThreeHi there raindrops! I'm here for one last review for you ^^ I'm starting to think I was wrong about the narrator currently being a newborn baby? Because last I ...
whatchamacallit - 12 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » General, General
MakeupHi there! I think this poem is quite interesting because it speaks to nascent curiosity about makeup, looking up to an older sister (at least, I presumed it's an older ...
Lavvie - 12 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
Before The Dragon - Chapter 19.1Heyo! I'm back, just a bit late ;)
SilverNight - 12 hours ago
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Reviews » Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic
First Love (2/3)Hi! Spunky here to review! Grows: Him, his mind clearly in a time and place far from now. Saying "Him, his" isn't a really good way to put this sentence. ...
SpunkyKitty - 12 hours ago
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Reviews » Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic
First Love (1/3)Hi! Spunky here to review! Grows: She looked back at the boy, who gave her a smile. Nancy pursed her lips as she thought about what to write back. “I’ve ...
SpunkyKitty - 12 hours ago
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