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First of all, as someone who hasn't read previous chapters yet, you do a great job of drawing people into your story from anywhere in the series. I already look ...

Ciel is back! Will Ciel remember Michael? It had been years since they had seen each other. Hopefully Ciel will remember him. If not, it will be like the day ...

There's something whimsical to this, and yet the whimsy is set off by an edge. I want to say intuitively it is a rim-of-winter poem: Still flashing fire, but beneath ...

Hey there! So, I just finished reading Part One of your story, "Siren's Desire," and I gotta tell you, it's pretty awesome! The whole idea of this legend about Israfel, ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is a wonderful piece here. That's honestly ...

hey silver! momo here with a review. i haven't written a review in a while, so apologies if this is really bad haha. i also haven't read previous chapters, but ...

Greetings from a fellow writing friend! Kaia here to spin by and give you a review. So here we have another one of Rinisha's infamous death fables. Okay, just joking. ...

I don't honestly even know where to begin reviewing here. This was an AWESOME piece. You have a very cool imagination to be able to come up with all of ...

Ryan seems a bit testy, but she probably has her reasons. I wonder if Ryan will love Yagi the same way he feels about her. I’ll have to see. I ...

Hey there! Spark here for a little review day review. Let's get into it! I like how you're directly addressing the reader as if they are in a conversation with ...

Hi Bear, Spark here to review. Let's get into it! Wow. Lot's going on here. I'm going to go through each poem individually, but review this from a more wholistic ...

Hi Forever! Let's get into it First off, I love this metaphor of spiders and power. I really enjoy this poem in its entirety but there are some beautiful lines ...

Hey there! I saw you review my poem so I am going to review yours too c:. If you don't remember me, this is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am ...

Hi Harray, You've got a lot going on here and I think you've got a great overall question and theme going for you. Curiousity is a great trait to have ...

Hi Cage, let's get down to it. I like the direction you're going with this poem, as comparative metaphors can be really compelling. I'm also a really big fan of ...