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Believing in wisdom
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The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Eleven
by felistia in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


Julia Portman's Crazy Middle School Life - Chapter 1
by Liberty500 in Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction


Julia Portman's Crazy Middle School Life - Chapter 2
by Liberty500 in Novel / Chapter » Humor


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  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Nothing kills a man faster than his own head

    Hey there silvermoon17! I'm here to review your poem, as I promised. Sorry it took me so long! I've been pretty busy this past week! So I really dig some ...

    Morrigan
    Morrigan - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction
    Julia Portman's Crazy Middle School Life - Chapter 2

    Liberty!! Wassuup. This is an extra special review for me, because it’s my 350th review... which means my first blue star! Anyway, let’s hop right in! I’m seconding Jabber on ...

    EternalRain
    EternalRain - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Chapter 1

    Hi, Im just going to give this my overall thoughts. Maybe put more detail into the characters and descriptions. The flow is pretty wacky so try ti keep it consistent. ...

    xJade
    xJade - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Chapter 1

    Hello. I'm new here, so don't expect my review to be very thorough, lol. I just have a few nitpicks here and there. Your story is very touching, by the ...

    beerbopz0
    beerbopz0 - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction
    Julia Portman's Crazy Middle School Life - Chapter 2

    Omg I love the humor in the narration. It's just so wonderful. It's spot-on Julia and amuses me so much. It makes it so much fun to simply read . ...

    JabberHut
    JabberHut - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Script » Film, Science Fiction
    Origin Point, scene one "Prologue"

    Hey Corvus! I'm Ellie, and here to give this a review. I'm a screenwriter, and I love it when people post scripts on the site, so I was excited to ...

    Elinor
    Elinor - 14 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    polarity

    this poem is great. I like your usage of rare words like "dalliance" and "tenebrosity". they really give the work a lovely feel. I few things I noticed: "and my ...

    CorvusQueen
    CorvusQueen - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Nothing kills a man faster than his own head

    this is an absolutely beautiful piece. I have read many of you're poems and noticed you are good at creating a sort of melancholy hope in your work. you are ...

    CorvusQueen
    CorvusQueen - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    polarity

    The vague words give us this polarity you try to express throughout this poem- but sometimes, things are auto vague. A poem is not supposed to have a fixed idea ...

    silvermoon17
    silvermoon17 - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Julia Portman's Crazy Middle School Life - Chapter 1

    HIIIII! I heard you're entering a contest, and you sounded a little overwhelmed, so I thought why not help out with reviewing your project?! This chapter was such a nice ...

    JabberHut
    JabberHut - 19 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Julia Portman's Crazy Middle School Life - Chapter 1

    Hey Liberty! It seems like you're already made changes to the chapters with Eternal's reviews, that's awesome because it reads really well. The writing flowed very well. Though, there are ...

    Dreamy
    Dreamy - 21 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 19

    Hi @DougalOfBiscuits I am here ones again to do a review for you. So lets get strait into it now shell we. Some really big things that I think your ...

    Dossereana
    Dossereana - 21 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Ten

    Hello Trops is here again with a short review for you finally, again sorry it took so long. Life is starting to take over. *Frown* Anyway let's start. May I ...

    TropicalRain
    TropicalRain - 21 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual
    Bone Witch, Coyote Magick

    Hello @Morrigan I am here to do a reel quick review here. so here we go. The frontman called it a country festival, but in reality, it was a mosquito ...

    Zeltornintha2
    Zeltornintha2 - 24 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Literature
    Believing in wisdom

    I really think this poem has potential but it needs a lot of work. My issues with this poem are: 1. The flow of it, its sort of all over ...

    ToxicAnglerFish
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