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  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Other
    Queen of Heart

    Hey, Luke here for a short review! So, first of all, welcome to YWS! I’m sure you’ll enjoy it here, it’s really great for feedback on literature, and the atmosphere’s ...

    lukekazey
    lukekazey - 26 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Before the Dragon - Chapter 19 (LMS IV)

    Hey Shady! Wow I'm back already I know it's a Christmas miracle but I want to TRY to catch up on reviewing even a little so let's see if I ...

    mellifera
    mellifera - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Other » Realistic, Romantic
    The Unfinished Diary of TBJ

    THis isn't exactly a typical review of mine, just some things I want to keep in mind and ask you when I review the other parts of this series — ...

    Traves
    Traves - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Before the Dragon - Chapter 18 (LMS IV)

    Hey Shady!! OKAY I'm finally back to review yay

    mellifera
    mellifera - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Realistic, Romantic
    The Unfinished Diary of TBJ (Part 4)

    Reading the title of this story again after I finished this chapter scared me into what this could possibly be. Unfinished?.... Well, I guess the whole Mason thing is over, ...

    GodfreysBouillon
    GodfreysBouillon - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Realistic, Romantic
    The Unfinished Diary of TBJ (Part 3)

    Man, at this point it isn't a review, even if I check the box that way so I can get points lmao I'm just here to follow up with your ...

    GodfreysBouillon
    GodfreysBouillon - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Narrative, Realistic
    Dear Self - 11/27/2018 - Flash Memoir

    This is so sincere and poignant and relatable. So many small details have private meaning or are inside jokes, and this adds so much more emotional depth to the piece. ...

    StarsForEyes
    StarsForEyes - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic
    Stars

    Hi lukekazey! Cat here for a review c: I really love the simplicity and calm beauty of the piece. It's quite cute c: Some of your thoughts are a little ...

    TheBlueCat
    TheBlueCat - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic
    Stars

    Absolutely beautiful! I love how it is divided, and how it all comes back to "What will you do?" The imagery was great, and I could definitely feel the love ...

    Riellehn
    Riellehn - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Literature
    Rain

    Beautifully written piece. The title prepares the reader for a sadder piece, before suddenly disaster strikes. The only question I can think of is concerning the choice of metaphors. Comparing ...

    Riellehn
    Riellehn - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    The Absurdity of hope

    Hey Traves! One Trial By Fire coming up. I'm gonna pick every sentence apart so it may feel like a lot of criticism but mostly it's just pulling up weeds ...

    Tenyo
    Tenyo - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Realistic, General
    Broken Beer Bottles

    Hey! I'm just going to go paragraph by paragraph with this review. Let's get started! The man’s lumpy voice reminded Dell of curdled milk. The only person Dell knew that ...

    JulietWrites
    JulietWrites - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, Realistic
    True Love

    Hey! Wow! It's not often that a story strikes me as much as this one did. The visual imagery and the unique concept are really something. I like how you ...

    JulietWrites
    JulietWrites - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Blame

    Hi reaganmcchristy!! It Sophie here to review your piece! ~ Like the others said, I think it is a brilliant idea to have the works cited because it gives credit ...

    sophies36
    sophies36 - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    abortion anthem of conceivus the fetus

    Hey! So, I'm not sure if this really needs a review. I will say that it seems very whimsical almost like Dr. Seuss. I don't think I have seen a ...

    Rascalover
    Rascalover - 13 hours ago


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"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites