Greetings! ^-^ I'm here with a review for ya! This prologue is amazing! It doesn't give away too much detail about the plot, but just the right amount of info ...

Hey there! I just went through your work and I loved it. I could feel a lot of suppressed emotions in there trying to come out. The internal conflicts that ...

^^ I'm back with another review! Taehyung and Jimin's friendship is so pure...I think it's the only thing that's keeping poor Tae sane these days... >.> With all The Swan ...

Hi rudrAbhinav! Traves here for a quick review. I think your flow and pacing is perfect.The start and ending stanzas are good, both in setting and changing the mood and ...

O.o The Swan has a day-job... “I know it can be hard to fill these roles, but even I have to work in the day, you know this. I have ...

Hey @unikittie It's a very interesting story you wrote here. I like the plot so far and this setting where the world has become unusually strange with this introduction of ...

^^ Greetings! I'm back with another review!! Yay! A new character. And she's the first female character in the story! Shes seems like a really nice and kind person, but ...

Hey, Vagrant! This lyrics of yours is deeply emotional. The tone of the lyricist is sincere, longing and powerful. With every rhetorical question there it made my heart sink When ...

Hey, @tgham99! This poem of yours is profound and a powerful piece which describes the plight of a new student at school. The title of the poem is lucid and ...

Wow -- that's all I can say when reading through this for the first time. This is such a powerful poem, which I actually think works well with the fact ...

Hello. Although this is a draft, it is very well written and organized. There are a few errors here and there but that is to be expected. There is nothing ...

Right off the bat, the imagery of this story stood out to me. This passage specifically: Cold-sweat, numb limbs that inch by inch feel less like they belong to your ...

Hello! Although I haven't read the other chapters and I dont really understand the story because of it, I still found it rather interesting. Even though I didnt really understand ...

Hello! Although I haven't read the other chapters and I dont really understand the story because of it, I still found it rather interesting. Even though I didnt really understand ...

Very interesting piece -- I like the repetition and the way the poem seems to represent the way a child views the world around them. I like that the poem ...