Hey there silvermoon17! I'm here to review your poem, as I promised. Sorry it took me so long! I've been pretty busy this past week! So I really dig some ...

Liberty!! Wassuup. This is an extra special review for me, because it’s my 350th review... which means my first blue star! Anyway, let’s hop right in! I’m seconding Jabber on ...

Hi, Im just going to give this my overall thoughts. Maybe put more detail into the characters and descriptions. The flow is pretty wacky so try ti keep it consistent. ...

Hello. I'm new here, so don't expect my review to be very thorough, lol. I just have a few nitpicks here and there. Your story is very touching, by the ...

Omg I love the humor in the narration. It's just so wonderful. It's spot-on Julia and amuses me so much. It makes it so much fun to simply read . ...

Hey Corvus! I'm Ellie, and here to give this a review. I'm a screenwriter, and I love it when people post scripts on the site, so I was excited to ...

this poem is great. I like your usage of rare words like "dalliance" and "tenebrosity". they really give the work a lovely feel. I few things I noticed: "and my ...

this is an absolutely beautiful piece. I have read many of you're poems and noticed you are good at creating a sort of melancholy hope in your work. you are ...

The vague words give us this polarity you try to express throughout this poem- but sometimes, things are auto vague. A poem is not supposed to have a fixed idea ...

HIIIII! I heard you're entering a contest, and you sounded a little overwhelmed, so I thought why not help out with reviewing your project?! This chapter was such a nice ...

Hey Liberty! It seems like you're already made changes to the chapters with Eternal's reviews, that's awesome because it reads really well. The writing flowed very well. Though, there are ...

Hi @DougalOfBiscuits I am here ones again to do a review for you. So lets get strait into it now shell we. Some really big things that I think your ...

Hello Trops is here again with a short review for you finally, again sorry it took so long. Life is starting to take over. *Frown* Anyway let's start. May I ...

Hello @Morrigan I am here to do a reel quick review here. so here we go. The frontman called it a country festival, but in reality, it was a mosquito ...

I really think this poem has potential but it needs a lot of work. My issues with this poem are: 1. The flow of it, its sort of all over ...