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the eternal fire
by birk in Poetry » General


to my father
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The Lost Dragon 3.3
by soundofmind in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


Kiss of Sunshine
by Aranya in Poetry » Narrative


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  • Reviews » Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative
    The Funny Egg Poem

    Hey there! D here to review this poem! As @riles said, I think it would be really good if line 3 was written as I wobble and jig until boom! ...

    Danni88
    Danni88 - 20 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Humor
    Spring Arises, Winter Dies Down

    Hello! I'm here for a review, I was strolling through the green room and I noticed this hasn't been reviewed yet. What a sin! Too bad you're stuck with me ...

    SergeantRosie
    SergeantRosie - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Script » General, General
    The Black Night

    This was really interesting and I quite enjoyed this little "script" or whatever you call it! That is the category you put it in anyway :) Anyway, time for actual ...

    SergeantRosie
    SergeantRosie - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 3

    HAI! I'M BACK! And I'm super excited to read your next bit. So let's get started... Hmm... not sure I'm loving the opening. Don't get me wrong -- it's a ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 2

    Heyo Bisc, Shady back again to see what in the world these animals are going to be up to in this chapter ;) Let's get started! Satisfied that all the ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 1

    Heyo Bisc, I saw your post asking for someone to adopt this novel... and I really can't guarantee that I'll have time to really commit to following this as a ...

    ShadowVyper
    ShadowVyper - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Satire
    Country of a Cruel Soul

    Hey there Liminality, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. 1) Style, Punctuation and Formatting So, the first thing I want to point out here is the fact that you ...

    myjaspercat
    myjaspercat - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual
    Kiss of Sunshine

    Hullo Arayan. It's been ages since I've reviewed much. But I loved the figurative base for the imagery in this. The idea of "sunshines" -- little sunshines -- gives a ...

    Poor Imp
    Poor Imp - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Stella Magenta Book 1 1.2

    Hiya! I'm back super early because I reversed the order of novels when I re-entered my novel links so this will prob be the fastest turn around you'll get xD ...

    elysian
    elysian - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Before the Dragon - Chapter 7 (LMS IV)

    Okay, I'm just gonna sit back, relax and slowly work my way through this quite long chapter pffft burnout what is that i haven't even heard of that Nit-picks: She ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    the eternal fire

    Hello! I enjoyed this piece of yours - thanks for sharing. I have to say: I really like your use of the words 'empyrean' and 'stygian' to connect with the ...

    Liminality
    Liminality - 17 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, Fanfiction
    Let it Go (Mount Doom Beats)

    OML! It's soo perfect! I swear this is already perfect enough to be put in the movies! Wouldn't it be funny if they added this song/parody to the end of ...

    RandomxStoryteller
    RandomxStoryteller - 18 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    the eternal fire

    Hey birk. This is Arpan to review your week. The poem is good, and the title is catchy, "Eternal Fire", although i found that the poem was hardly linked to ...

    Arpanekka
    Arpanekka - 21 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics
    Cat Steps Chapter 4.1

    Okay I'm finally here! I'm glad to catch this one early, as I always am ;D And as always, I adore your chapter, so let's get that on the table ...

    Vervain
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  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    the eternal fire

    Hey there birk, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review First of all I would love to say that I found this poem to be very beautifully written. I love ...

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