Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I didn't have any problems with the overall grammar, so I'll move onto the rest of the chapter. I ...

Hello EmilyRMaiorano! I'm stopping by for a quick review! I like your poem and the idea behind it. So many people talk about love being the driving force of life, ...

Hey there EmilyRMaiorano, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. I do not believe in love Place a period here. I think that having this line as a single sentence ...

Hi there! First of all, I really like how the poem is set out. The way you start each stanza with a different age, and gradually increase the ages from ...

You know, when we first met Alder, he legit seemed like a crazy, fire-and-brimstone sort of old dude. I honestly thought he might turn out to be a bad guy ...

Alienated. I see what you did there. (I also liked Oval.) “That is no excuse for bad nutrition. Being in a wheelchair does not mean you are incapable of being ...

Hi Nymeria! (I love your username!!) Man, for a brief plot description of a short film this held a lot of tension and emotion. That's a fantastic place to start! ...

"No, Mia," Uncle Fred replied, equally softly but with a spark of something in his voice. "We're monster hunters." *queue Supernatural theme song* I probably would've liked Uncle Fred to ...

You’ll eat any kind of cake but think red velvet is just fake chocolate. Smart cookie, that Elijah. Red velvet is chocolate cake dyed red, and it's disgusting. ANYWAY. On ...

AWESOME, Monica finally gets to shine. I'm excited to see where this goes next. You did a much better job with suspense and emotion in this chapter - even before ...

Hello! I thought this was a very promising premise for a story, and a very impressive effort considering you only had a day to write it. Generally, I felt like ...

Hey, I'm here to review! All in all, this chapter is solid, as usual. I like how you keep the suspense of the driving by giving them a few moments ...

This poem of yours was excellent, as usual. I guess it was not written in your usual style, but had the magical Kays touch anyway. Beauty, realism and dreams shone ...

Hey, Light. I try to keep my promises, even though they come in months later lol. Let's proceed with the notes I got. -I noticed from the beginning that the ...

Hey Mea! Sorry for the delay--I meant to review earlier but got busy instead. It's lovely to see Ayda with her mother, to see the changes that these events wrought ...