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rock or roll
by Anamel in Poetry » Dramatic


The Sleeping Prince and the Knight
by dahlia58 in Short Story » Other


On Love
by TheShauzer in Poetry » Romantic


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by Zaibae in Poetry » General


The Sculptor's Knife: Chapter 1.1
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  • Reviews » Short Story » Realistic, General
    40 Seconds

    The introduction is certainly attention-grabbing. I think it's great for making a new reader continue to read on, like a hooker in an essay. Because it's the beginning, it will ...

    Anamel
    Anamel - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Realistic
    Winter From a Hater's View

    Hey Softballgirl333! Katja here to review your poem! As always please feel free to disregard any comments or suggestions I make if you find them unhelpful. That being said, let's ...

    KatjaDawn
    KatjaDawn - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Realistic, General
    40 Seconds

    Hey Aari, DrFeelGood here to review your unusual piece. Let's dive into this piece shall we? Plot I am a little puzzled with the intention of this piece. It starts ...

    DrFeelGood
    DrFeelGood - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Other, General
    The Sleeping Prince and the Knight

    Hi Dahlia, I really enjoyed reading this mini story. It's melancholy and sweet, and I love the fairy tale vibes. I do have some questions that you might consider addressing ...

    Nymeria
    Nymeria - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Realistic
    Winter From a Hater's View

    Alright. Interesting. Not my perspective for sure, but completely valid. I liked how you rhymed some lines but not all of them-- excessive rhyming can be annoying. "On the oh-so ...

    Nymeria
    Nymeria - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    How Do You Plead: 2.2

    Hey, no nit-picks really. Most specific thing is a whole paragraph which there's not much point in quoting. That paragraph is the last one. It's kind of a jolt in ...

    ExOmelas
    ExOmelas - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    How Do You Plead: 2.1

    Hi again, still not midnight and I'm 3 reviews away from 5 blue stars... Why did there always have to be stupid fucking metaphors like this in the pathway to ...

    ExOmelas
    ExOmelas - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    How Do You Plead: 1.3

    Hiya, just waiting til midnight so I can start this week's LMS, thought I'd do some reviewing: He avoided a tasteless joke about sailors while adding the name to his ...

    ExOmelas
    ExOmelas - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Realistic
    Home

    Hi, Zaibae. This is Aari, and I read your poem and just wanted to let you know what a great job you did. Although, I have one feedback for you: ...

    Aari
    Aari - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Of screaming silence

    WOW, this hit me hard. I really felt like I got punched in the gut with how powerful this was. You really talk about some deep topics. I love the ...

    Raelyn
    Raelyn - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    You

    yes, I agree poems are a great way to dump your feelings:) I do the same thing! Now about your poem! I really like this because it was almost like ...

    Raelyn
    Raelyn - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Literature
    On Love

    wow, the imagery here is mind-blowing. I really love this poem because it really warms my helpless romantic heart. I really liked the line: then heaven may yet surprise me, ...

    Raelyn
    Raelyn - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, Literature
    On Love

    Hi, this is Aari. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. I think it is such a sweet and short poem, and it captures such a pure moment and ...

    Aari
    Aari - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Empty, Silent, and lost

    Hello there! this is such a lovely yet sad poem. It is very depressing at parts, especially the part where the writer thinks that they are their own worse enemy. ...

    Zaibae
    Zaibae - 18 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, Romantic
    The Moth and the Firefly

    Good morning, mel0! This is SUCH a cute poem, and your narration of this story is really well done. It was easy to picture everything happening, and the pacing worked ...

    JabberHut
    JabberHut - 20 hours ago


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