Hey there! D here to review this poem! As @riles said, I think it would be really good if line 3 was written as I wobble and jig until boom! ...

Hello! I'm here for a review, I was strolling through the green room and I noticed this hasn't been reviewed yet. What a sin! Too bad you're stuck with me ...

This was really interesting and I quite enjoyed this little "script" or whatever you call it! That is the category you put it in anyway :) Anyway, time for actual ...

HAI! I'M BACK! And I'm super excited to read your next bit. So let's get started... Hmm... not sure I'm loving the opening. Don't get me wrong -- it's a ...

Heyo Bisc, Shady back again to see what in the world these animals are going to be up to in this chapter ;) Let's get started! Satisfied that all the ...

Heyo Bisc, I saw your post asking for someone to adopt this novel... and I really can't guarantee that I'll have time to really commit to following this as a ...

Hey there Liminality, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review. 1) Style, Punctuation and Formatting So, the first thing I want to point out here is the fact that you ...

Hullo Arayan. It's been ages since I've reviewed much. But I loved the figurative base for the imagery in this. The idea of "sunshines" -- little sunshines -- gives a ...

Hiya! I'm back super early because I reversed the order of novels when I re-entered my novel links so this will prob be the fastest turn around you'll get xD ...

Okay, I'm just gonna sit back, relax and slowly work my way through this quite long chapter pffft burnout what is that i haven't even heard of that Nit-picks: She ...

Hello! I enjoyed this piece of yours - thanks for sharing. I have to say: I really like your use of the words 'empyrean' and 'stygian' to connect with the ...

OML! It's soo perfect! I swear this is already perfect enough to be put in the movies! Wouldn't it be funny if they added this song/parody to the end of ...

Hey birk. This is Arpan to review your week. The poem is good, and the title is catchy, "Eternal Fire", although i found that the poem was hardly linked to ...

Okay I'm finally here! I'm glad to catch this one early, as I always am ;D And as always, I adore your chapter, so let's get that on the table ...

Hey there birk, Myjaspercat here to leave you a review First of all I would love to say that I found this poem to be very beautifully written. I love ...