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  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    a little like you

    so i've come again, as promised. i'm beginning to feel as if i owe you, and so i'll try my best and get my thoughts and opinions through here. atmospherically, ...

    amelie
    amelie - 45 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Politics, Culture
    I am an Immigrant

    Hi there Lau2001! Niteowl here to review this fantastic poem. Overall, I really liked this. It was heartfelt and flowed nicely when I read it out loud. That said, there ...

    niteowl
    niteowl - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Politics, Culture
    I am an Immigrant

    hey, here for a review. Let's just say, oh wow. This poem is screaming what the world needs to be seeing. I really do like this poem, it's emotional and ...

    anngelalu
    anngelalu - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy
    Stop the Rewind: Chapter 2

    Hi! "Minecraftia" made me giggle XD I wasn't expecting the change of viewpoint here, and it works really well. Personally, I much prefer novels that switch viewpoints, especially when the ...

    Tenyo
    Tenyo - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Untitled Sci-Fi Novel - Chapter 2(incomplete)

    So, I'll give my first impressions first: 1) You used a lot of language that was unnecessarily confusing. I see a lot of that in sci-fi, but that doesn't necessarily ...

    StormCycle
    StormCycle - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction
    Stop the Rewind: Chapter 1

    Hi Mage! As a general impression, I get the feeling your writing style is quite unrefined, and that's okay. In fact, it's pretty good. Some of your grammar is loose ...

    Tenyo
    Tenyo - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Script » Other, Realistic
    War. famine, and plague

    Hi KyrianKane! This is interesting! I like where you're going with it, but it feels a little raw. The points made in it are really strong, and you cover a ...

    Tenyo
    Tenyo - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic
    The Battle for Paris : Chapter 1 : Paris.

    First thing I noticed in here was the imagery. Very well done on this part. I can imagine the blistering heat and starved dogs foaming at the mouth. The sun ...

    Aleta
    Aleta - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic
    The Battle for Paris : Chapter 1 : Paris.

    This is difficult to read due to how often you switch tenses: Present: On top of the carriage is a woman wearing a large cloak Past: On the other side ...

    Zoom
    Zoom - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense
    Tid bits, bacon bits

    Hello, This is a really trippy story you've got here. As Lauren said, it's very surreal—the way it slides from one event to the next haphazardly, without any rhyme or ...

    Noisette
    Noisette - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Spiritual, General
    A Stone's Throw

    Hello, This is terrific! (Also: Your username is amazing.) You seem quite adept at philosophical writing—not to generalize, but so many young writers, when trying to write something "deep" or ...

    Noisette
    Noisette - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Shadowsong: Chapter 3- Those Echoing Cries of Pain

    MeatBunCat here again! I couldn't move- some hidden force bound me. I struggled, but it was futile. I could see nothing, hear nothing, smell nothing. All my senses were silenced- ...

    MeatBunCat
    MeatBunCat - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative
    Val: Precursor

    Hi hi! Finally here as requested, so let's get started! :D My first thought is: iiiiinteresting... Second person really works for me. I love the mystery of who "you" is ...

    Carlito
    Carlito - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction
    Melt - 1.1 - Falling Girls

    This is Nikayla here for a review! As you know, I'm not the best at reviewing prose, but I'll jump right into the review and try the best I can. ...

    Nikayla
    Nikayla - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction
    Untitled 05

    Hi Hi! I saw this in the green room and remembered reading the other chapters, so I'm back for more! :D Things I've mentioned in previous reviews apply here as ...

    Carlito
    Carlito - 10 hours ago


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