Well that was really somber and heart-wrenching: I hope it wasn't a recount of an event that occurred in your life or anything. Yeeks! It's so well written (appearing to ...

Well this is quite a bit different from the usual tropes to be seen around here. I like the context of the poem more than the actual flow and scheme ...

Hi, me again. Your story so far is really good. Try making your chapters a bit longer. And add backstory. What about Jade? It is sort of weird that he ...

Hi. Prachi again The grammar mistakes have decreased a lot compared to your previous chapters. I think you should increase the length of this chapter. Usually, it helps to end ...

And I'm back as usual! This chapter is lovely. Edna and Clem bonding this way feels a lot more natural than it did a few chapters ago, even though the ...

Awesome poem! It was very heart warming, as I myself love cats! You had some really awesome descriptions. I could definitely envision the cat as if it was right here ...

Hi RoyalHighness! This poem was very nice. It was an interesting perspective, and was very well written. I had a lovely time reading it. I have a few critiques for ...

I wouldn't want to drown... FantasyWriter76, or Fantasy76 if you prefer, here. Today I'm gonna review this story! This was interesting as a concept and such. The character is going ...

Please feel free to ignore my advice, it is not meant to offend you hurt you or make your story seem bad or demean it, regardless of what I have ...

Please feel free to ignore my advice, it is not meant to offend you hurt you or make your story seem bad or demean it, regardless of what I have ...

Okay I really liked this poem. It was well written. It was amazing. I loved how it was like a person looking out a sea thinking about life. One thing. ...

Please feel free to ignore my advice, it is not meant to offend you hurt you, make your story seem bad or demean it. However brace your self for impact ...

Hey there Radrook! I just wanted to say a few things about this poem of yours. First off, congratulations on your extensive vocabulary, but I think that's a reason for ...

Hello! Cat here to add some thoughts to this before I get too far in the reading! c: I don't know if this is really a review, but it'll probably ...

dun dun DUN! amazing beginning of a promising novel/ series! I wish you could have made the chapter a little longer, made some characters that Molly would potentially miss. Maybe ...