Walking in a cold Winter, weather never clear
Rain always falling, snow always near
Raindrops hit my skin, the cold chills my spine
I hate Winter I hate the cold and the snow, the slippery ice and so much more
But I love winter more and more.
The rain that hits my window, and the leaves
The peace of silence, surrounded by a breeze
I hate the thought of winter and being cold
but I love winter, I love the thought of being alone
-Max
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MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very similar to the incredible YWS S'more Method but I have Halloween-ified it and made it spooky! My little black cat friend, Vladimir, wants to offer his opinion on your amazing literary piece:
Mystical Witch Hat - What I See, Observe, and Interpret
This poem was lovely to read
Beautiful!
It is the coldness that allowed you to be alone. Sometimes we need to suffer some things in order to see beauty.
Vladimir’s Advice - Suggestions for Improvement
You capitalize the word Winter,
Here:
and here:
But you do not do this,
here:
and... here:
At first I thought the capitalization was symbolic of a higher being or personage, but I am not too sure
Jack O’Lanterns - My Favourite Parts and Praises
This poem was incredibly well done in terms of making the words flow well! I need to applaud you for...
snow, slippery ice, so much more, all flow so well! *applause*
Black Cat Cuddles - Concluding Ideas and Thoughts
Lovely job, my friend
Have a great night. Take care!
Your friend,
Ellie
I hope you have a spook-tastical day, filled with black cat mischief!
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!
Shalt we commence with the review?
Top Graham Cracker - This poem is about a Winter that has rain and snow, the favorable parts and the unfavorable parts, the season of gray skies.
Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - The sentence with loving Winter “more and more” has a period. If it was intentional, then ignore this.
Chocolate Bar - I love how you describe the beauty and the ugliness of Winter! It can be loved or it can be hated, depending on how one looks at it. My favorite sentence would be about the “peace of silence”. Sometimes, all someone needs is silence.
Closing Graham Cracker - A short little poem about the good and the bad of Winter. No one can deny that it’s the somber start of the season, the white snow and the silver rain. I enjoyed reading this!
I wish you a fantastic day/night!