Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
There was a kind young girl named Jennifer.She was fifteen years old and she had deeply cared for her family and friends.
Especially for her girlfriend,Philippa.Philippa's family had their own circus and Philippa had to perform there as a clown.On top of that,she had school to worry about,people who mocked her at the circus to the point where she actually had taken their hateful words to heart,Philippa's parents wanted more from her constantly and it was draining,her older brother,Conrad,was an adult and had his own life,so she couldn't go to him and her sister Lily,who was only three,was too young to understand.
So,Jennifer was around.Jennifer cared about her and loved her,she had wanted her to be happy and to live her life,because it was a wonderful thing.
But this story did not end happily.
When Jennifer was being driven by her mother to spend some time with her at the mall,a car going at an alarming and illegal speed crashed their car,which had killed them both.
Jennifer was now an angel in Heaven,who hoped,more than ever,that Philippa would get on alright without her.
The last thing Jennifer needed was anything horrible happening to Philippa..
Ahhh I have read four of these in a row and all four times you managed to throw us into four completely different world in four completely different styles and I am just loving the range here. It seems like you really have pages upon pages of worldbuilding and honestly I just want to see a full on piece just detailing how many little features you've implemented into this world because there's just so many.
Anyways so here we've got yet another style of story, more similar to perhaps Nova's from what I read earlier but a little more geared towards Jennifer only really being a benevolent force. I really love the way you set up her backstory. Its a little bit on the more cliche style with how Jennifer fall in love with the complications to the parents and all of that, but I like that you showcase a little bit of how they tried to survive it and the death itself being a simple and unfortunate accident makes this a bit more unique.
Overall I love the setup up here as well, and especially how Jennifer appears to remain the lovely person she always was despite her life being robbed of her in that manner and the fact that she only seems to wish happiness on her former girlfriend and nothing more despite everything else that took place.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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