Hello there, Vagrant !!
This is Eros here, with a review for this beautiful romantic poem...
First of all the most beautiful thing in this poem is the repeated usage of the word, Forever.
It adds a lyrical effect to this poem. I loved this poem, and also loved your way of expressing the thoughts about how love can change a person's life.
The way you have described the transition from sadness to happiness is blended together perfectly. I loved it.
The presentation of the poem is also very good. I especially loved that picture on the top. I felt as if I am reading an actual hard copy of the poem. The picture above gives it a feeling ...a soft feeling.
The way you have described the natural elements like the nights, stars , and the way they represent every different feeling is awesome.
Like, a drop of water in draught, represents the feeling of satisfaction etc.
Everything you have described here is really beautiful.
Overall, a wonderful poem. An amazing work...
Keep writing such awesome stuff and we will keep reading them !
Have a great day/ night !
~Eros
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