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This is a brilliant poem. I hope that your mum liked it.

It says exactly what people feel, in a brilliant way. It's a cute poem and the rhymes make it flow so it's easy and fun to read.

I liked how this poem was so real, it makes it easy for people to relate it to how they feel about their mum or any of their family members. It was clearly written truthfully and with loads of emotion.

This is an amazing piece of work, well done!

This is a great Mother's Day poem- I'm sure your mother will love it.
Just one quick comment- in the line, "I apologize in advanced", there is just a simple grammatical error that is easily fixed. (Advance, not "advanced").
Other than that, this is a great poem. I like the usage of the rhyming, and the tone is very sweet- the emotion to it is very real.
Great job.

This is a very nice piece and i can very well relate to it too. How we shy away from out true feelings just so that no one thinks we are weird or different. We want to fit in, and in that bid often do not aptly treat those who love us most. This is the message that i got from the poem.

You have maintained a rhyme scheme throughout and have very beautifully expressed your feelings.

Keep up the good work.

Ok, its very very good. And it made me smile too because it made me remember how i love mum. Well, you did a good job like what most people said from their comments.
But the lack of punctuations was a bit of a downer. The content was good but without the puntuations, you wouldn't know where one idea ends for another to begin. Anyway, i do like it.

This was a great review! I'm sure your mom would love this. I love how it rhymes every other line. Poems like that can draw in a reader. Make sure you keep writing!

How about a bit of punctuation friend? Anyway apart from that I felt some words sentences were twisted in structure just to keep up the rhyming. People often end up making every other sentence sound odd. No rhyme scheme is still better than the forced one. Well anyway that's just what I feel. The poem is okay. The theme is fantastic. I still have a feeling it could have been a lot better but then again you might have written it in ten five minutes or so thinking purely about your feelings for your mother and not giving a rat's ass about the critical point of it. That's not a bad thing to let the feelings out via poems. Keep writing, keep on improving. Cheers

I love your poem! keep up the good work