Hey phangirldivergent46, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review!
I liked this poem your flow was nice and kept me reading. I like the description, because I could visualize what was going on and what you were saying. I did a lot of those things too and now that you mention it I can remember them. I can feel the emotion from then and I took this poem to heart. Overall you did an amazing job writing this. Great job and keep up the great work and I hope to read more of your work in the future!
AshleyDashley
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