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This is a nice poem! I like the name of the poem and that you clearly explains why its called Life is Like a Hill although out the poem. You did a good job and should continue writing poems!
I don't even know sorry
What's enjambment?
thanks Its one of my favorites that i wrote
Your poem is vary realistic and well thought out.Pluse I thought the poem flowed well too.Nice job once agin.
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Howdy there!
At first glance of your poem I really like the layout. Whether it was intended or not the layout of the poem is similar to that of 'hills' which immediately relates the layout to the title. This shows extensive thinking - thinking outside the box.
I love the use of enjambment I think it helps the poem to flow nicely as the use of punctuation separates the sentences, so good choice of sentence structure.
Generally I would say your word choices are exceedingly good, however you do repeat the word 'you' an awful lot. I know you're trying to be specific but I had to read it through twice just to confirm I understood that section, so just be careful
Overall a really nice piece of poetry.
Well done!