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I really like this poem, but there are a some mistakes. I think "as" should be "has" and the sentence
"and noticing it's only is making things worse," I think is backwards, but I don't know for sure. And you might want to change "emothions" to emotions. I know you probably didn't mean to make these
mistakes, but I'm just telling you so you can fix them. I really did like this poem though.
Thanks and Thank you. I also Like this poem.