Hmmmm. I like these. X3
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EVER'BODY READ THIS PART.
This is a specific type of poetry that reads the same way sideways and up-and-down. That's why it's a little funny.
If anyone can tell me what type of poetry this is, please do, cuz I forgot. (It was a school assignment.)
Edit: Should I space things out so it's easier to read vertically? Cuz.....people keep telling me the grammar is wrong...... XP
How much do I love you?
Much more than you can know.
Do then, tell me much more
I, you, me, we are one
love can, much are we together
you know more, one, together forever
What things do my future hold?
Things that are unknown to me
do, are things set in stone?
My unknown, set before my heart
future to in my eyes hold
hold me stone heart, hold tight
Hello again. Just thought I would check over this for you since you asked. Here it goes...
O how I love this boy<<<<<It should be Oh.
dog, sea, wind, tongue, seaspray, joy<<<<<<< Not 100% sure on this, but I believe Seaspreay is 2 words, like Sea Spray. Any1 clarify that?
Other than the commas, which we talked about already, thats basically all I see. I actually not very good at reviewing poems because im honestly not big into poetry, but just thought I would help anyway. Keep up the good work.
This was good stuff. A few gramma errors but other than that it was nice. Keep up the good work. Maybe sometime you could review some of my work?
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