*This song/poem is underneath my folder titled “Binky Slinky the clown and other stories”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Enjoy!*
First, George was born to Trista and Damon
Then, Gavin came along next
A family united by pure love
Joy at their birth
Nothing could diminish the tied bones
Nothing except a witch
With bones dipped in envy and rage
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Hi creeper 😊 Here for yet another of your stories ^^
I really like the final line of the poem, the image of envy and rage running so deep that it reaches the bone. I do wonder what you mean by “tied” bones. It kinda feels related to that. I must imagine either something like conjoined twins or that this is a fancy way of saying that they are very similar/of the same blood?
That said, I feel like the poem itself feels rather basic. Aside from this cool line, you just have a description on where the boys come from and a rather standard line in “united by pure love”. Feels… not as cool as the final line.
yeah it just talks about them coming to the world. you got it right about the tied part meaning family.
thx for reading!
I'm just going to leave all my questions here because I can't think of anything else intelligent to do.
Did Gavin come to the same couple that George came to?
What does tied bones mean? Are they twins that were connected at birth? Or are tied bones simply referring to them being family?
What is meant by diminish? And I assume the bones dipped in envy and rage is the bones of the witch?
You got the stuff about bones correct. Yes, George and Gavin are siblings.