*This song/poem is under my folder titled “Binky Slinky the clown and other stories”. Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Enjoy!*
Trista, Damon, and Gavin
Got to pass on in the Heavenly sky
But George was forced to possess a clown toy named Binky Slinky, representing an innocence corrupted
Right after he died
Talia the witch enchanted it so
Little girls would be drawn
For if her love, Damon, the one she thought would worship her so, didn’t want her, saw her as only a friend
Then why did other little girls deserve joy?
And that’s why Talia cursed
A strange-looking clown toy
For one day, they would rest
The girls and those that cared for them
But not for a while
Not while the clown toy kept reappearing in the antique aisle
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These connect to this!:
Cathleen’s creepy clown doll
Estella’s escape
Saving George
They just don’t know
In Heaven, they are free, in Hell, she will bleed
Talia, Damon, and Trista’s thoughts as it all unfolded
When a witch loves
Damon and Trista’s wedding
Talia burns
I liked this so much, I think you captured a lot of things in so few words too it's incredible.
It's fun and spooky it gave me some ideas and I will check out some of your other work!
poems are some of the best, most interesting, media in my opinion they tell stories and in a manner that's so beautiful as well. I really hope you keep doing what you're doing this was enjoyable to say the least.
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Is this a sort of urban myth legend type of thing. It kinda reminds me of the monkey, which is a movie, but has the same concept, a small wind up monkey that is more than it seems to be and ends up being a murder switch, in the breifest of summary's. I think it is interesting that children are drawn to it because it was enchanted by a witch. Is Talia the name of the strange looking clown toy? Sorry I am little confused, but also intrigued.
Talia is the witch that trapped a human spirit (George) into the toy. You can read more under my folder %u201CBlinky Slinky the clown and other stories%u201D.
I created these characters and this story, but yes, it%u2019s like an urban legend.