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DAMON
She came back. Talia came back to teach them all a “lesson”, as she would call it.
“I trusted you, Damon! I loved you!” Talia had said to him.
But why him? Why not anyone else? Why did she have to target his family? Did she not learn anything from the forest fire?
No, she wouldn’t. She was always one to cling onto her judgement, especially if it was completely wrong.
Damon tried reaching out for Trista’s hand, but even then, he couldn’t reach out to her.
Everything was ending so soon, but at least he’d be able to rest…
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TRISTA
Who was that woman? How, exactly, did she do what she did to them? Her eyes seemed to be met with such hatred when she looked at Damon.
Wasn’t she at their wedding? Didn’t Damon say…
He said that she was his friend, Talia.
Trista coughed up the blood that was lodged within her. All in the blink of an eye, Talia had made them bleed on the ground.
Trista could sense something up above that was calling up to her, something that smelled like flowers and felt like freedom.
It was none other than Heaven, she felt it in her dying veins.
She held onto Gavin’s hand, so that at least he would feel safe.
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TALIA
She thought that they would put up more of a fight, but no! Her powers had instantly made them all bleed to death. All Talia had to do was a wave her hands around and think of bleeding them out, and then they were all dying!
It was quite the disappointment, how quick her powers had worked. It wasn’t as fun or exciting as the day she burned down an entire forest.
But, the older boy, the teenage son…he caught her eye. He had to be around thirteen. He was gasping for breath, trying to hold onto his little brother’s hand, who may have been six years old. She didn’t really care.
The boy was close to adulthood, but not quite. Perhaps he had a friend who was special, like her, but he didn’t like her back. Maybe he was just like Damon. Maybe he failed to see potential.
She knew that the rest of the family would get to rest in Heaven, but up in the Heavenly sky, Talia wanted Damon to see what she would do to his son.
She wanted to take away something that was precious and dear to him.
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Alright, I think I can still remember the characters from this story so let’s do this.
Never mind. I am so lost. I do dimly remember something abt a forest fire tho…
“but no! Her powers had instantly made them all bleed to death.” As you do, happens to the best of us xd
Okay that is super disturbing: “Talia wanted Damon to see what she would do to his son.” Oh no nonono
And the last line! Gosh. I really dislike being in Talia’s head, well done!