OMGGGGG POEMS ABOUT LOVE ME WANNA SPINNNN!
Hey valentin3 here to shoot you a quick review:
Wow! This is a super great poem. The way you express love just make me... AHHHH.
Now lets dive in:
avimoon wrote: i mumble my
apologies
for being so stinky
when you smell so good.
you laugh it off and
smile at me
This quote I really love. It truly shows the love that each character has for each other. *insert internal screaming*
avimoon wrote: like the lovesick doofus
i pretend not to be.
Calling yourself a lovesick doofus more than likely shows that you sort of a hopeless romantic.
Thats pretty much all I have to say! Make sure to capitalize the 'I'.
Love,
valentin3
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