I liked it. It was simple and not overly drawn out or like constantly sad, it was realistic.
You managed to portray that being lonely isn't always sad, it's just sad for those who don't like being alone.
I loved that you used simple language most of the time but added beautiful words like "desolate" or "everlasting" and that made the poem a good read.
(if you'd like to add a few extra stanzas then I could suggest you write about the fear of the unknown on the roads or like the weight he carries in his heart or something like that.)
Happy writing.
Points: 670
Reviews: 10
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