my Way, your Way, their Way
People versus People
Being served around a table
Beating their chests, jabbing utensils deep into neighbors' hearts
Indifferent towards their neighbor
Snatching at the mounds of food
Chanting at the heavens, "We are able! We are able!"
Because they see only the food
And the supply comes steady
And keeps demand stable
Which sustains their bodies,
Their vulgar habits.
They've seen the waiters
And they laughed and spat on them as the plates were delivered
Day after day, meal after meal
Causing some servants to quit in disgust, yet most slaved on, scorned,
Undeterred, Waiting…
Though none had ever seen the chef;
save for messages in his pen that waiters carried in on every plate,
At the bottom of each pile of grub--
it was His marks, the details of each delicacy's Price and Weight
But consumers didn't want paper, didn't bother with the inklings
They went on mowing down the pastries, the melons, the cocktails
And the flavored meats
Until they discovered they hungered for flesh
And pried lustily at neighbors' hearts, to plop a heart on their platters
As they beat their chests crying, "Plates of bloody meats! Bloody meats!”
Almost in spite of the unending slips of paper
That were scattered like feathers about the chair legs
And the servants read…
"Orders from the chef," mocked the flesh-gnashers
For the "Bossy" voice in the messages vexed them sore
As well as jaded taste-buds that stuffed them bored
None wished to sample the chef's suggestions.
So Meats flooded the halls
And the Bread, and the Greens, even Drinks tapered off
As the chef tailored the desires
Of their pig-style slop
And among the grease and the blood, any penmanship was lost…
…as in the early 21st century
The world's cities heaped up skyscrapers of rot
So as they beheld them, the hearts of the inhabitants shaped the same way
Decay blotted out their Vision, and what Good meant was forgotten
When fulsome became the norm, and in the whole of the globe
Was ingrained the thoughts of Sodom and Gomorrah
"It's my life, get outta my business, don't judge me."
"Meekness is weakness, and unwarranted kindness, a façade."
But God is merciful
But only so long:
He said, "Judge not, lest you be judged."
That meant, "Condemn not, lest you be condemned."
Because He said, "Judge not, and you will not be judged; condemn not,
And you will not be condemned; forgive, and you will be forgiven."
He said, "Hate the evil, and love the good,
And establish judgment in the gate."
Righteous judgment not the skin into account takes
"Do not judge according to appearance, but judge with righteous judgment."
Righteous judgment looks at the actions, not the person
"For the judgment you pronounce, you will be judged."
So we welcome the person, we help them see their errs,
We give them ourselves, got their backs like honest friends
The correct Christian way,
Has the piercing look, and all the heartbreak
Of a loving parent doling out discipline
That corrects not makes allowance for.
Because "The mouth of the righteous speaks wisdom, and his tongue talks judgment."
The parent that returns not the child punishment for wrong
Loves not the child
Because "In those days Israel had no king; everyone did as he saw fit."
And as result
"The way of peace they know not; and there is no judgment in their goings."
the consequences can be seen flourishing; Apply it today
Improperly disciplined children, growing up confused of right and wrong
Morals replaced by ethics, what the laws of men-children sing-song
Because He never said, "Do not be angry."
He said, "Be slow to it."
And that He is…
Which means that Day must Come
When the table shall be flipped
And leave those feasting at it, desolate
And leave a man in a white, fluffy hat
Making known how his restaurant was perverted
Sodom and Gomorrah expired.
Can the whole world follow
The footsteps of those two cities,
wrong indecipherable from right,
And not expect to store up God's wrath?
When God will scatter the likes of the wicked abroad
And at that Table-Flipping,
The apocalypse will ensue, meaning time of The Revealing
A Seven-year, World War 3, that will ultimately be a battle for all souls
An Earth-shattering time, the harbinger of Judgment Day
At the end of which, the Chef will prepare cake
And throw a neverending party for his Servants:
Those who patiently, faithfully Waited, cared for the diners,
In the Ways and Name of the Lord
So that the Tablers might see His love through their reciprocation of it
And seek out the chef, recognizing him by His Word
and spread it to the very Feasters, that they once lived like.
And the Lord's party shall be
A place for the dejected, the poor in spirit, the humble, the meek,
Alone
But those that have not hearkened, will face Judgment--
Not the judgment given by the Waiters, done with loving affection--
The kind that serves justice: balances the scales of vengeance by way of condemnation…
But if you want to attend the party,
The Invitations lay all around you, at the chairs' legs;
All you have to do is this:
Get up from the table
Wash your hands
And ask for an application
To be a Wait at the Chef's restaurant
To do things God's Way
I know the drill;
I started, as all of us do, at the table
Yet There came no point from that sort of material living after sometime
So I looked back down, backed from the Crowd, 'Vestigate the call to rounds of Serving,
Quickly got distracted sat back down for another taste,
One thing had led into another,
relishing, reeling, recalled my service; forgot my plate
But something called me to my fate again and I ran back scar-hard
If you turn that 180
At that point, you will always be safe
Unless you adhere to society, take up lodging among The Great Cult
A Restless, Self-indulgence Movement that "redefines" the rules, never breaks them
Under the pseudonym of Peace & Tolerance and Respects of men
Trying to rip YOU off indulgence, but can never rip you away from God--
Not even by taking your life.
"Why," said
the furry rabbit, dangling from the fox's mouth, by the scruff of the neck, "Life is everlasting."
The fox snorted and replied, "How much you wanna bet?" "I'd wager my life," withstood the hare.
"Suits me." said the fox, who stopped to hold the hare out in front of its fiery breast. "But I'll tell you one thing, rabbit." continued the fox. "Death is more everlasting." and he lifted the still hare toward his mouth, licking his lips.
The little hare laughed merrily before the teeth came down. "Tell me, which of us is truly dying at the moment?" demonstrated the bunny. The fox wasn't listening. It was one of those old rabbity tricks, he reasoned. The fox barely stopped to chew. His meal satisfied--until lunchtime came around.
So riddle me this, would you rather be the fox, or the hare?
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Wriskypump, all I can say is-- namaste. One of my favorite words. It means the spirit within me respects and honors the spirit within you. And I say it with all sincerity.
The first section was definitely one of my favorites. An amazing hook.
I appreciated how all throughout the work you quoted scripture. I would ask you to list references, but not during the writing. Perhaps put them at the end.
The way these consumers expected all the food yet abused the waiters and ignored the chef's imploring invitations was an accurate picture of our society today. We tag God's name on the end of presidential debates and the end of our lukewarm prayers, wanting the stuff, the delicacies of the chef, but we do not want to serve.
Also, I am glad that the perfect balance of hate for sin without judgement of the sinner was emphasized in this written work. So often we have Christians who chose only the extremes, tolerance for everything or condemnation for all.
The way you spoke of the waiter leaving for a while, but then the chef calling him back to serve, goes to show that Christians are not super-holy people, nor do we think we are. But we praise God for his receiving grace.
My one piece of critisism is: you said all you have to do is wash your hands and ask for an application. It is true that you wash your hands. But you wash your hands in blood. Jesus didn't just give you a handy dandy little "I'm a Christian" ID tag. He suffered and poured out his blood for us. The sorrow and pain he experienced, I feel, should not be called you washing your hands. God receives you. But that is because his son paid your debt. That is the only point this piece of writing lacks.
Thank you for the insight and keep writing.
I cannot wait to see you at the chef's grand party. Namaste
You're right! I did not convey to the proper degree the importance of the crucifixion, what his sacrifice meant. I put that all under wash your hands, and looking back, that was a huge mistake, that sacrifice should never go understated. And yes also, your interpretation is pinpoint, bull's eye perfect. Ya, Jesus didn't do all that and expect nothing in return from us: he wants us to use the rest of this mortal life, doing his bidding, leading as examples of his love, and through our example (which we mess up as much as anyone, though we try our best) give our light to our fellow friends in darkness. I'm so happy you discovered and accepted the truth in your lifetime, and encourage you to never give up even when all things look darkest. I can't wait to meet you at that party either.
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Hi Wriskypump, Laughmaster here to praise your work.
I don't know how people might review this work? This Is Brilliance!
By all means this is epic!
This stanza was enough indication for me that this work will be something astounding. And it is really really good.
I have only one complaint here. Your poem has so many good lines that I can't even highlight all of them
Your pacing is good, your imageries are ravishing but it's your impeccable vocabulary which deserves round of applause. This work has a stamp of Perfection carved over it.
With this let me highlight some of my favorite lines.
Phenomenal!
And this is my favorite -
Completely Nailed it! One of the best works I have read in recent times.
Laughmaster's rating: 20/10. (10 is too less for a work like this)
Thank you Laughmaster! Yes, truly, the rabbit/fox thing was done on a whim and I posted it before even looking it over more than a glance, so that was kind of a half-hearted attempt, unlike this that underwent the microscope 3 times before I even thought about posting it.